Cut it apart

Disjointed, dissection.
Like that which came before.

Dissection like that which,
came before disjointed.

Like that which disjointed,
dissection came before.

Like that which came before.
Dissection, disjointed.
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Blackborough Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 8:35 PM
This was inspired by a very honest comment on another poetry site. This is a reflection on the subjectivity of poetry. Considering there's no correct way to write a poem, it will be judged regardless.
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April 18, 2024 at 8:57 AM
I'm glad you noticed. It's meant to represent thought process. I don't worry about judgement too much. Sometimes I worry things aren't good enough though.
Diderot Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 8:39 PM
there's a certain element of honesty in the constructed madness of this piece of insanity...I wouldn't ever worry about the judgements...
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