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Cut it apart

Disjointed, dissection. Like that which came before. Dissection like that which, came before disjointed. Like that which disjointed, dissection came before. Like that which came before. Dissection, disjointed.

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Date: 4/8/2024 8:35:00 PM
This was inspired by a very honest comment on another poetry site. This is a reflection on the subjectivity of poetry. Considering there's no correct way to write a poem, it will be judged regardless.
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Ryan Blackborough
Date: 4/18/2024 8:57:00 AM
I'm glad you noticed. It's meant to represent thought process. I don't worry about judgement too much. Sometimes I worry things aren't good enough though.
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Candide Diderot
Date: 4/16/2024 8:39:00 PM
there's a certain element of honesty in the constructed madness of this piece of insanity...I wouldn't ever worry about the judgements...

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