Customized Gold Bracelet

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Hi poets, I tried doing Ghazal although I didn't follow the Rhyming and syllables. I want o join the contest but I know my craft will not win, although I tried with Sonnet, I hope I win Wish me luck.

Customized Gold Bracelet

1.	My birthday on the 17th of May
2.	Fiance in Middle East- Dubai has a birthday gift

Customized Gold Bracelet

3.	His name is Tai-Angelo Lizarraga
4.	Customized with “Angelo” on a Gold Bracelet

Customized Gold Bracelet

5.	His 1st born son’s name
6.	“Angelo” Lizarraga

Customized Gold Bracelet

7.	USPS Delivery date is May 27th 2025
8.	It didn’t come

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9.	USPS is always late
10 Next day is May 28, 2025

Customized Gold bracelet

10.	My mother didn’t recognized it
11.	We didn’t know it came with Angelo Lizarraga

Customized Gold Bracelet

12.	My fiance’s name is Tai-Angelo Lizarraga
13.	Not in my name, Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Customized Gold Bracelet

14.	Fiance didn’t want a customized ring yet
15.	He likes it when we’re together

Customized Gold Bracelet

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