Curtains and Doors

Here is a door.
Dark brown.
cherry wood, isn’t it?
Why yes of course it is.
The knob is gold.
And it makes that satisfying click when turned just a bit to the right.
Well maybe I don’t like cherry wood.
Maybe I don’t prefer doors.
They are dark.
Sad.
So dreary sad.
So uncomfortably
Noticeable
As if shouting the contents they so hide away.
Curtains, you say.
Maybe, perhaps.
They are light.
Welcoming the eye
But what they stow,
Oh.
Maybe its not the curtains
Or the dark cherry wood door with its captivating gold knob.
The key in the drawer is much darker.
Yes. 
Thick.
Solid gold.
So heavy.
So captivating.
So penetrating.

So lonely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 1:03 PM
wow this poem comes to me as a giant metaphor for a lonely soul, but not just that, maybe even someone trying to keep a secret, or to knock the locked doors in our mind out of the way, it could be taken so many ways and thats why i love it! =)Jo
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February 17, 2010 at 6:14 PM
sad, nice job
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