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Premiere Contest Winnercurse of quiet -

if you can not speak, hear ...

I am no better than you -
we are turning inward en masse
light gleams from the mountaintops and steeples
warning us with dread, yet our swirling head is never fully fed
the beast, reticent as death, wastes breath on blame

it screams without a voice to shatter the mirror of truth
begs with keen intent to move our lips
to reach and grow and sing
the song matters not ...
it is the lilt music of elucidation that begs to tremble the air

and the sacred echos not our own ...
lies and cries ... moans-to-sighs
the pregnant replies that move in the womb of hope
cloaked in doom they grope for sound, sacred
but are born wan and still and cold ...

if but a heaven's thunder to rattle the starry veil
to coax the sun to wail its bright, athwart the darkening hem
to tear the dreams from our hearts, and cast them upon our fellows
to feel the weighty wonder of dire discourse and deliberation
to burn our iterations in the frozen flames of compromise

but first, to daub tender our lips with utterance
for if the air hangs deaf and dewy like the crimson morn
we will surely earn our sorry fate and folly
and cold curse ...
of silence ...

if you hear, speak.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Sound Of Silence" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Hello Gregory R. Baden, in the quiet you can hear the voice of silence. Enjoy your evening my firend.
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Bravo, Gregory. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:03 PM
hey, are you ok? I don't think I ever heard back from you on my last soupmail.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Love the bookend effect of your intro and conclusion and everything between was just amazing, Greg. A very well deserved trophy win for you!! Wish I could write more free verse this way!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 7:14 PM
You deserve the Trophy with this astounding poem Greg. This is incredible! Congratulations! If you have time check out my poem 'By Starlight-20 Titles From 20 Friends' as one of your titles was included. Bravo! xxoo
Mcgee Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Great job. congrats!
Ruwindi Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:55 AM
Wow! This is amazing! Congrats on your first place win :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:56 PM
In your usual elegant eloquent style, a wonderful podium win Greg, congratulations! xomo <3
Agustin Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Wow! Congrats. Yes, I heard... God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations, Greg!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Congrats on your top placement.
Blodgett Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 1:19 PM
Beautiful premise....if only the world would hear them speak!! Truly appreciate your words. Lonna
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 12:47 PM
What can I say G, you continue to mesmerize and astonish me, congrats on a top win in my premium contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Greg, I love your beginning and end. It is fun to see the different poems that come from the Sound of Silence. Great imagery!
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