Curly Wisps

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Shadorma

A Shadorma is of Spanish origin and consists of a 6 line stanza using the following syllable counts: 3/5/3/3/7/5. There is no rhyme scheme.

Curly wisps


of ebony locks


glistening


with each stroke,


releasing whiffs of jasmine


She combs out her hair.


(Shadorma)

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/26/2019 5:12:00 PM

Lovely, Emile. A sweet scented image. I love the rhythm.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2019 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/20/2019 12:05:00 PM

New form for me, I like it, well done Emile...

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/20/2019 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Charlie, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/20/2019 11:11:00 AM

A sensual write, that feels right, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/20/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/20/2019 10:00:00 AM

Lovely scented image, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/20/2019 10:46:00 AM

Thanks Line, I welcome your support my friend, Emile.