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Hair Composition Poetry Contest
Sponsor is Kim Rodrigues
Ninth Place

Ouch! Please mommy stop it’s not fair I pulled on her robe as she pulled on my hair Halfway through combing out my long curls mother hurries to get to the other girls Gentle brushes won’t tame unruly locks now grown sentimental first hair cut marks a milestone I never thought I’d cut it off though she’d threat But too many tangled tears shed for this brunette It helped to see others face the shears none were emotional not a pout no fears It’s graduation for older kids in the neighborhood on our block mom's a beautician mums the word The kitchen used as her hair salon, coloring and stylish up-do’s was right on The can of Aqua Net sprayed tickled my nose up next for a cut was my best friend Rose Quit moving and crying I’m running late, how 'bout if I cut it up to date My lips were trembling, yes please do! I saw ringlets of hair falling, one-two I was only five and scared to look in the mirror Why didn’t she just use No More Tears Short was popular for curly tops, so lickety split Part it to one side and stick a bow in it

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Date: 5/30/2025 10:56:00 PM
My mom cut my hair so short when I was a child with long bangs patterned to all mushrooms in the wild. Such a fantastic poem that I extremely enjoyed reading today my dear poet friend Anaya. Warm Congrats on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing this gem. God bless. Hugs
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/31/2025 1:09:00 PM
We have that in common, dear Len, and what imagery mushroom shaped bangs! TYVM, so glad you enjoyed ~xhugs
Date: 5/30/2025 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on 9th place! (see my blog) A very good place to be! This contest was filled with great poems. I smiled to see you have a pic of Shirley Temple. Love that second line. My grandma had a parlor in basement of her home. Aqua Net and No More Tears nostalgic! Nice!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/30/2025 11:45:00 AM
Ah, :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 10:37:00 AM
There is a technical issue with the page so I have poetry soup looking into it. Somebody else had a similar problem. Hopefully there will be a fix!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/30/2025 9:49:00 AM
TYVM Kim! I enjoyed your contest. Nostalgic is the curly top in her sailor suit! and hair spray and tangles, lol. The second line was going to be... "It’s graduation for older kids in the neighborhood on our block mom's a beautician mums the word" but i think Ouch! may have got your attention~ You aren't showing up in the contest results/winners section, you may want to check it~ Love, xhugs
Date: 5/27/2025 10:51:00 AM
Mom knew how to mange your hair. Although youg girls do not want to cut their hair, in modern days it isnot a bad idea.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2025 5:49:00 PM
Short and sassy! It grows back~
Date: 5/27/2025 7:43:00 AM
this is quite touching , and made me think to some characters of cinema( movies), my mother too , thanks for the emotion dear poet
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Date: 5/27/2025 9:21:00 AM
A revival for the movies and mom's who cut hair! Ty for the great review~
Date: 5/27/2025 4:29:00 AM
Dear Anaya, I love how you captured the innocence and vulnerability of childhood, and the mom's hustle as a beautician adds a fun touch. I enjoyed reading this. Best, Anne
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2025 9:20:00 AM
A first hair cut can be all those things, definitely a milestone as I added it to the poem. It's nice of you to have enjoyed Anne. Your encouragement is truly appreciated~ xhugs
Date: 5/26/2025 10:24:00 PM
My hair was super curly as a kid, and my mom cut it, lol, super short and weird, lol. It's good we can laugh at it.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2025 8:15:00 AM
Paige mine grew so thick, my mom used special scissors to thin it out! I do laugh, at the large rollers~

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