Curly Red Haired Girl

Have you seen the new curly red haired girl?
Cannot say that I have, he replied, wondering.
Why was everyone saying this to him?
This was the fourth person who had asked.

There she is! Four people shouted, watching his reaction.
The minute he saw her, he understood why.
She looked like his mother had looked when she was young.
She had died when he was six, but he remembered her face.

Her hair was a bit darker than this girl’s but her eyes were the same.
Everyone wants us to meet, the girl told him, except she was not a girl.
He invited her to lunch and they talked; she was a terrific listener.
He felt he had regained a tiny bit of his mother, which was soothing.

I guess I remind people of your mother? She suggested.
She looked a lot like you, he admitted, but she was not a great listener.
I prefer speaking to you.
And he was not fibbing.
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Proxenos Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 12:10 PM
So important to be a listener, it means you care. There are so many, who only want to talk, mostly about themselves. Lovely write! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 3:42 AM
We all need a good listener; so sad when we realize how little others want to listen.
Hankins Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 9:36 AM
It's always nice to meet and make friends with someone who is compatible.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Absolutely true!
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