Caryl Muzzey Poet Limerick

Curiosity

As a child it was fun and quite daring
To ogle what the other was carrying
We hid in the loft
Where we played quite oft
To inspect what the other was baring

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "There once was a man from Dunkirk ” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi 
Feb. 15, 2011

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 21, 2011 at 12:31 PM Great Limerick and great win Caryl.. luv your title and brought back memories my friend.. thankxx for sharing with luv..

Gert W. Knop January 20, 2011 at 7:11 AM Congrats to your 5th place in the contest, Caryl! Gert

James Fraser January 19, 2011 at 12:30 PM Naughty but koolio written Caryl. Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2011 at 12:05 PM Caryl, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2011 at 6:10 AM Congratulations Caryl, on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2011 at 8:21 PM hahaha. Good and funny, CAryl. Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 18, 2011 at 12:39 PM Congrats Caryl on your big win in the Limerick contest ... a great one .. enjoy much sweet success.. with luv..

Sara Kendrick January 18, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun January 18, 2011 at 8:19 AM Hi Caryl - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Dr.Ram Mehta January 17, 2011 at 2:05 PM Very witty and funny write for the contest, Good luck. caryl

Carolyn Devonshire January 17, 2011 at 12:27 PM Just the right blend of naughtiness and humor in your limerick, Caryl. And this is truly how kids "play" in the loft. Best wishes for success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun January 17, 2011 at 9:00 AM Great limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC

Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2011 at 8:22 AM Line 1 OK Line 2 goes off at the word just/ line 3 OK/ line 4 of by starting woth a STRESS/ Line 5 also starts with a STRESS, who want da da DUM or da DUM..starting every line HUGS Thanks for the entry, hurry contest is full am judging.

Michael J. Falotico January 17, 2011 at 5:13 AM Yes a I agree with Tahera.. best of luck to you ..

Tahera Mannan January 16, 2011 at 8:31 PM wow a true depiction of teenage years. all the very best for the contest.