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As a child it was fun and quite daring
To ogle what the other was carrying
We hid in the loft
Where we played quite oft
To inspect what the other was baring

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "There once was a man from Dunkirk ” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi 
Feb. 15, 2011

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Date: 1/21/2011 12:31:00 PM
Great Limerick and great win Caryl.. luv your title and brought back memories my friend.. thankxx for sharing with luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congrats to your 5th place in the contest, Caryl! Gert
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Date: 1/19/2011 12:30:00 PM
Naughty but koolio written Caryl. Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest....:)
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Date: 1/19/2011 12:05:00 PM
Caryl, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl, on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:21:00 PM
hahaha. Good and funny, CAryl. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your big win in the Limerick contest ... a great one .. enjoy much sweet success.. with luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:19:00 AM
Hi Caryl - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:05:00 PM
Very witty and funny write for the contest, Good luck. caryl
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:27:00 PM
Just the right blend of naughtiness and humor in your limerick, Caryl. And this is truly how kids "play" in the loft. Best wishes for success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2011 9:00:00 AM
Great limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:22:00 AM
Line 1 OK Line 2 goes off at the word just/ line 3 OK/ line 4 of by starting woth a STRESS/ Line 5 also starts with a STRESS, who want da da DUM or da DUM..starting every line HUGS Thanks for the entry, hurry contest is full am judging.
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:13:00 AM
Yes a I agree with Tahera.. best of luck to you ..
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:31:00 PM
wow a true depiction of teenage years. all the very best for the contest.
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