Cupid's Golden Arrow

Golden arrow hits its mark
releasing love pheromones
attraction is imminent
wedding or shotgun

Copyright © 2011  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Winged Cupid” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dr. Ram Mehta
April 16, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 22, 2011 at 6:19 AM
Wonderful write!Congrats Caryl on your win---kashinath
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March 21, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations to you Caryl for your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Good one, Caryl. Many congrat's on your win,Elaine
Horne Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Great poem, Caryl. Congrats on your win! Thanks for your kind comments : ) Jack
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Hey Caryl, congratulation on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;)
Mannan Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:08 PM
Haha. Good one Many many congrats on this wonderful win.
Freeman Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 9:11 PM
Good to see you at the top Caryl. Congratulations with this worthy honored fifth place. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Congrats Caryl on your wonderful success in the Cupid contest.. delightful words my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Loved this one, Congratulations, Caryl.
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:15 PM
I'm still laughing at this poem, Caryl. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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March 20, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Congrats my dear!!! well done
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in my contest, Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 10:54 PM
Oh, my, I LOVE the twist ending on THIS gem. Hope it does well in the contest!!
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 2:25 PM
Thanks for the entry in my contest, Caryl
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 11:42 AM
VERY clever, Caryl! This Cupid poem should wing its way to the top in the contest. Especially love the last line! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 11:40 AM
hehe, this is hilarious Caryl.. loved how you ended yours.. Wishing you all the best for Dr. Ram's contest ;) Wilma
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