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Cupid's Cruelty

Hopeful he is, as he looks to me, Dreaming of the curves of my articulate body; A dream he cannot have. He cries, knowing love is harsh, For Cupid did only hit him, and him alone, As I march, arm in arm with another much fairer and greater than he. The pains of unreciprocated desire bash the hearts of those who pay the price, To love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2011 6:42:00 PM
wow! Allie, so true,,, cupid can be so mean when it comes to love,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 4/5/2011 2:46:00 PM
a good write, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:03:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry Allie. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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