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Cupid's Arrow

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Below is the poem entitled Cupid's Arrow which was written by poet Carol Sunshine Brown. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cupid's Arrow

love dart
we got

go slow 
oh no

wow date
loves bait

love you
so new

why wait 
soul mate




Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/22/2012 1:50:00 AM
so cute, you've caught every emotion the first glance, the flirting, the moment of butterflies, and finally love .. too great
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:42:00 AM
Nice Footle Carol, and many of us will have lived it. Have a most wonderful Sunday :)
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Date: 2/16/2012 6:33:00 PM
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! lol... why wait... good one... Hi... awesome avatar...this was a very xool footle to read... thank you for sharing...always~ ;-) PD
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Date: 2/16/2012 11:54:00 AM
Great Carol - very clever! I hope that you are keeping well and that life is good! Liz
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:01:00 AM
when it's right it's right! great description :) hope you are feeling better about soup.
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:21:00 PM
Fun, fun, fun!....Milt
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:14:00 PM
Love these cute footles, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2012 5:10:00 AM
SOUP MAIL
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:01:00 AM
Short, Simple, and Sweet. very lovely write girl. VDay was bad but this made me smile. thank you for making me smile tonight in this lonely hour in Alaska.
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Date: 2/15/2012 12:23:00 AM
That is a cute poem Carol, better late than never!
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Date: 2/15/2012 5:11:00 AM
Amen to that! Smiles.
Date: 2/14/2012 10:41:00 PM
CAROL you still are the queen of the house. Nice work!
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:30:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem, it is good.
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Date: 2/14/2012 3:24:00 PM
Ah yes, you did a wonderful job with these Footles! You got this form completely Carol! I loved this Footle: "why wait, soul make" that turns out to be your best in my opinion! However, they are all very good! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 2/14/2012 11:15:00 AM
Enjoyed them all..It is good thing that you feel this way after a number of years of marriage..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Happy Valentine's Day..May this be the greats one up to this point in your life..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2012 8:52:00 AM
Nice set of footles Carol. Great for Valentine's Day.
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Date: 2/14/2012 8:10:00 AM
An amazing job Carol arranging and displaying, Happy Valentine's Day Dear Woman, love, vie
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