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Cupids Arrow

When last we spoke An image came This latest journey The latest challenge That will test The strength of Our RESOLVE to Build upon the love Begun long ago Now re-inspired Hesitant at first like the Faltering steps of a foal in spring Struggling to stand Kicking up its heels Now thundering hoofbeats Racing toward an Ever closer finish line Two hearts then Pierced By arrows from A Cupid’s bow Souls now merged by Love in overflow

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/23/2019 12:43:00 PM

Hello Mel Gill, oh such a lovely poem you created. i like it so much -My fav. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/23/2019 12:44:00 PM

Now my fav. have a nice day my friend.

Old Buck

Date: 10/1/2019 8:38:00 PM

Mel: Well done. Thank you for sharing those "lovely pictures" with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2019 7:13:00 AM

I was struck 26 years ago and could not be happier with Cupid’s aim.

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/1/2019 5:44:00 AM

Nicely written!

Susan Mills

Date: 1/27/2019 9:20:00 AM

It is so fun to think about Cupid arrows and romantic (eros) love. Enjoyed!

Mel Gill
Date: 1/27/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thanks, Susannah. Watch for my forthcoming: Birth to Death and Points in Between: A book of poems, perceptions, reflexions, aspiration, and inspiration. A lot more eros to come. Mel