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Cupid the Straight Shooter

Chubby cherub with a bow
Looks my way and spreads those wings
Seems to have his sights on me
Cupid,shoot 'em straight!


for "Winged Cupid" contest
sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/22/2011 6:25:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/21/2011 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations to you Deb for your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 3/21/2011 10:42:00 AM

Good one, Deb. Many congrat's on your win, Elaine

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/21/2011 8:25:00 AM

A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win with this delightful write :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/20/2011 10:10:00 PM

Many many congrats on this wonderful win.

John Freeman

Date: 3/20/2011 9:18:00 PM

Delightful job Deb. Congratulations on your worthy honored eight place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 3:25:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your sweet success in the Cupid contest luv.. delightful words..enjoy with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2011 3:23:00 PM

Really cute, this is one I somehow missed seeing earlier. A big congrats to you, Deb.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 3:19:00 PM

Deb, Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 3:06:00 PM

Congats Debbie on your win.. well written Piece .luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2011 2:46:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in my contest, Deb

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 7:40:00 AM

I hope it hits you right in thats sweet and inviting heart ... Love your workmy dear and best wishes for the contest...luv Michael

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/18/2011 8:38:00 AM

Very cute poem Deb...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2011 10:04:00 AM

Delightful, Deb. I'm glad Cupid doesn't shoot straight when he aims at me. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/17/2011 7:23:00 AM

Cool and clever lines Deb.. good luck in the new contest.. hope this chubby cherub aims for your heart luv.. as luv makes the world go round ... enjoyed ..my friend..