Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Cupid Don'T Let It Miss

Cupid, drawback your bow, please
Don’t let it miss, don’t let it tease
Release the string, let the arrow wheeze
Squeeze through the trees 
Carrying it off in the gentle breeze 
Pierce my lover’s heart when I’m on my knees


Cupid drew back his bow while I proposed 
She saw the ring in my hand and froze 
Weeping shrieks of passion came up close 
Caressing my face saying I do when I arose



1/6/2016

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Afzal Nusker January 17, 2017 at 12:10 AM Profound! Definitely 7 & a fav.

Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2017 at 11:19 AM This should do well. I also like This version of the song by Sam Cooke.

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2017 at 5:50 PM such a sweet picture of a proposal, Eve. Good luck in the contest. I think judges are going wild with Valentine theme now. Eve Roper January 8, 2017 at 5:59 PM didn't make it :( , but thank you

Demetrios Trifiatis January 7, 2017 at 7:30 AM Ah how marvelous a story dear, Eve! Very well done my friend! Eve Roper January 8, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thank you, Demetrios, Hugs Eve

White Wolf January 6, 2017 at 10:41 PM Cupid, latin for desire! A lovely poem, Eve /|\ Eve Roper January 6, 2017 at 10:53 PM Hello there:-) thank you /l\

Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 10:17 PM Just please tell him not to point that thing in my direction:) I love a happy ending, Mrs Eve.