Cupid Arrows

Your sharp arrows, oh tempting Cupid,

Left your bow and flew for once astray

Hitting my innocent then heart, that to

The pains of love, has fallen now prey!




©   Demetrios Trifiatis
     10 October 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Although love may cause pain, l welcome cupid anytime.Great job!:-) Alexis 7
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October 12, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Who doesn't my dear friend, Alexis! It's the most delightful pain of all! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a manner!
Tor Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Demetrios cleverly written as always. Beautiful message in this one my friend.
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October 12, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Michael, so good to hear from you, dearest friend! Thank you!
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Shame on Cupid doesn't know when to leave things alone...!!!Hahaha... love the poem
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October 12, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Thanks to him we have the people we love and love us! Eve, I fulfilled my promise to write a poem inspired by yours! Thank you!
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October 10, 2015 at 12:20 PM
- Thankfully, not painful arrows ....... - Beautiful my friend Demetrios - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 10, 2015 at 1:25 PM
Thank you so much, dear Anne-Lise for your visit and for...enjoying Cupid's arrows! Hugs!
Rabura Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 8:53 AM
i love this. short with a good message. oh cupid...
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October 10, 2015 at 10:04 AM
If you love it , my new friend, then you adore Cupid! Thank you for your visit and kind comment!
Chircop Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Oh that cupid have a way of giving love but even of taking it..Awesome.
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October 10, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Dearest Charmaine, if I knew you would visit me when about Cupid I write then I would have written it long ago! Haha! Thank you!
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