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Cupid Arrows

Your sharp arrows, oh tempting Cupid, Left your bow and flew for once astray Hitting my innocent then heart, that to The pains of love, has fallen now prey! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 October 2015

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/11/2015 10:17:00 AM

Although love may cause pain, l welcome cupid anytime.Great job!:-) Alexis 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2015 7:57:00 AM

Who doesn't my dear friend, Alexis! It's the most delightful pain of all! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a manner!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/10/2015 3:18:00 PM

Demetrios cleverly written as always. Beautiful message in this one my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2015 7:58:00 AM

Michael, so good to hear from you, dearest friend! Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2015 3:01:00 PM

Shame on Cupid doesn't know when to leave things alone...!!!Hahaha... love the poem

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thanks to him we have the people we love and love us! Eve, I fulfilled my promise to write a poem inspired by yours! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2015 12:20:00 PM

- Thankfully, not painful arrows ....... - Beautiful my friend Demetrios - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2015 1:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Anne-Lise for your visit and for...enjoying Cupid's arrows! Hugs!

Boygene Rabura

Date: 10/10/2015 8:53:00 AM

i love this. short with a good message. oh cupid...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2015 10:04:00 AM

If you love it , my new friend, then you adore Cupid! Thank you for your visit and kind comment!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2015 8:03:00 AM

Oh that cupid have a way of giving love but even of taking it..Awesome.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2015 10:03:00 AM

Dearest Charmaine, if I knew you would visit me when about Cupid I write then I would have written it long ago! Haha! Thank you!