Cupcake Bedtime Dance

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For Contest...Brenda Chiri " A New Dance Explained "

You get two pillows for your head Then you climb inside your bed And make sure you do this dance in open light You put a cupcake on your nose And you wiggle all your toes Then you wiggle your big toe from left to right Then you squirm and move your hips And you pucker up your lips When the cupcake falls, you have to try to take a bite If it gets squashed inside your pants Then you've done the Cupcake Bedtime dance You've made a mess, now clean it up, and say good night Country song

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/2/2018 11:20:00 AM

Hello Charles,I like this country song. Yes that would be a mess. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:22:00 PM

Well, that just put the icing on the cake...Thank you, Darlene...and you as well, have a wonderful day!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 5/1/2018 8:45:00 AM

A fun (although fattening lol) dance Charlie; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 4:24:00 PM

Wow, OMG your right, not doing that one again..lol Thank you so much Che :) You too....Charlie

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/28/2018 5:41:00 PM

Parents must be lining up outside your door to get you to babysit. LOL. Very cute poem, Charles.

Charles Messina
Date: 4/28/2018 5:56:00 PM

LOL, I have six children and three grandchildren....I would absolutely make a good baby-sitter....Thanks for reading Line....Have a good evening !