Cupcake Bedtime Dance

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For Contest...Brenda Chiri " A New Dance Explained "

You get two pillows for your head 
Then you climb inside your bed 
And make sure you do this dance in open light

You put a cupcake on your nose 
And you wiggle all your toes 
Then you wiggle your big toe from left to right
 
Then you squirm and move your hips 
And you pucker up your lips 
When the cupcake falls, you have to try to take a bite
 
If it gets squashed inside your pants 
Then you've done the Cupcake Bedtime dance 
You've made a mess, now clean it up, and say good night  

Country song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/2/2018 11:20:00 AM
Hello Charles,I like this country song. Yes that would be a mess. have a nice day my friend.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:22:00 PM
Well, that just put the icing on the cake...Thank you, Darlene...and you as well, have a wonderful day!
Date: 5/1/2018 8:45:00 AM
A fun (although fattening lol) dance Charlie; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 4:24:00 PM
Wow, OMG your right, not doing that one again..lol Thank you so much Che :) You too....Charlie
Date: 4/28/2018 5:41:00 PM
Parents must be lining up outside your door to get you to babysit. LOL. Very cute poem, Charles.
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Date: 4/28/2018 5:56:00 PM
LOL, I have six children and three grandchildren....I would absolutely make a good baby-sitter....Thanks for reading Line....Have a good evening !
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