Cul De Sac

his mind had entered a state of confusion
numb blank and befuddled on one hand
with walls in front 
and verges closing in behind
enclosed in a mixture of discomfort 
and pressure to move

stand still for a moment
a voice quietly whispered
with a chorus answering
run for your life
polarized messages
a Jungian way of saying
only uncertainty is clear

he coughed up some phlegm
a mixture of nicotine and discontent
and tried not to give too much importance
to the dreams he had had

maybe there was an aperture 
in the partition in front of him
there was a chance that the blind alley could see
not a through road but rather a simple conjecture
that could be refuted with patience and time

three things he knew was that he would not
turn back on himself in anger nor sorrow
that an imprisoned state
could serve as a prism
and reflection would eventually
lead him through darkness 

19th February 2023

This or that volume 16 cul-de-sac
sponsor Edvard Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/6/2023 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with this great poem, Kai:-) I loved it!
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Date: 3/3/2023 12:55:00 PM
My sincere congratulations on this impressive poem and your placement in Edward's contest Kai. :)
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