Cuddling Charmed Traces

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"I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming . . ."

*another time another place, where even dreams gently intrude,
a place where silence breathes a voice,entrancing the heart of a man
another hope, another choice, another contemplative charm,      *     *
along a road a tree sways, chanting to each passing ear
the words she touches but cannot see, the words erasing the fear,
and though there’s still a strain, that somehow just won’t go away   *
fascinating thoughts affirm that faith grows stronger by the day~ ~


~they sit there talking side by side, so many tunes in their rhyme
no place for anything to hide, transparent is the hood of time,
his voice cuddling traces of before, a sacred place of long ago      *
another sanctum, another key, a space that they still have to know,
and as they hum of when and where, a voice calls softly from behind
like delightful  music of the breeze, that feels so heavenly designed,
* then suddenly the night drips gold, as the necklace floats into sea
and just before he leaves, he tells that all their dreams would come to be. ~ ~




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For Constance: Daydreams, dreams and dreams Contest
From: nette onclaud
10 Jul 11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/18/2011 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:00:00 PM
A well done poem for this contest. congratuations. Mike
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:44:00 PM
Beautiful and enchanting Nette. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:10:00 PM
Beautiful Nette. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:12:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your terrific win with this first class poem on daydreaming .. mesmerizing my friend... oh..
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:53:00 PM
My con gratulations on the third place win in the contest, nette
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:28:00 PM
just a joy to read, the page layout was perfect for the feel of the verse too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:17:00 PM
Had me going there babe, looking good for the contest made, xo, Don
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:40:00 PM
thankxx Nette luv.. did I tickle your tummy with my sweet sausage scallopine? it smells divine .. I don't eat meat so I never tasted it but my crew luvs it..
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:07:00 PM
Nette this is a jewel, absolutely stunning!! Wishing you all the best for Constance's contest ;) *drukkies* Wilma
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:55:00 AM
Nette....Oh Nette! The imagery, mood, and message in this one are so brilliant! Excellent write... it gave me goose bumps! Love it!!! Lay
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:11:00 AM
very creative piece of poetry, good luck in contest.
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:51:00 AM
Another reads like a winner..Good luck in the competition..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:16:00 AM
Amazing poetry here Nette....fantastic choice of words....enjoyed very much...best wishes.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:56:00 AM
this was a great write hope you do well in the contest with this gem cory
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:55:00 AM
When I grow up I want to write like you.:)..You got another winner here. Beautiful.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:25:00 AM
a haunting mesmerizing piece Nette luv.. exhilarating lines accent the butterfly dream concept luv.. such details and super imagery will forge this one to the top for sure..good luck my sweet friend... u have met this challenge
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:15:00 AM
wow! this is outstanding... and nette thanks for the smiles on my blog... thanks.. always,..p.d.
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