Cuckoo

CUCKOO

high ~ coo coo ~ haiku
wee bird opens door and sighs
duty calls and calls

Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Frances Schiavina

May 16, 2017 at 9:16 AM

Very good!

Kim Rodrigues

May 16, 2017 at 9:49 AM

THanks, Frances!

John Michaels

April 28, 2017 at 4:01 AM

Clever write, Kim. Well done! Regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues

May 16, 2017 at 9:49 AM

Thanks, John!

Kim Rodrigues

May 16, 2017 at 9:49 AM

Thanks, John!

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2017 at 11:00 PM

SO clever, and cuckoo!!!

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 11:07 PM

LOL!

Chris Green

April 26, 2017 at 5:36 PM

I never know what I will find when I click on one of your poems except to know that it will be creative and fantastic. I was right again. :)

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 7:29 PM

Thanks so much, Chris!

Paul Callus

April 26, 2017 at 5:36 AM

Creatively done, Kim...I like! Cuckoo found free lodging, but he's got to work for his keep:) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 6:56 AM

LOL, Paul! I like your take on the subject!

Maria Williams

April 26, 2017 at 4:01 AM

This is a great Haiku and so clever Kim. Love it,

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 5:07 AM

Thank you, Maria!

Joseph Soper

April 26, 2017 at 1:15 AM

Nice one..... loved it... remind of me of some of mine... little twist in a traditional form...

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 5:08 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Supraja Kannan

April 26, 2017 at 1:09 AM

Beautiful hai...coo.... Lol... Great one... Loved it... A big 7...

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 5:10 AM

Thank you, Supraja! :)

Eve Roper

April 26, 2017 at 12:06 AM

I like this poem, Kim... ~*

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 5:10 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Jan Allison

April 25, 2017 at 8:14 PM

the first line made me lol great play on words Kim in a very clever haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

April 25, 2017 at 8:25 PM

Thanks, Jan!

White Wolf

April 25, 2017 at 7:06 PM

They drive you nuts! Great haiku, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

April 25, 2017 at 7:10 PM

LOL. Our clock stays off except for the grandkids :) but that's why I bought it after all!

Sunlite Wanter

April 25, 2017 at 6:48 PM

How cute! Made me remember those pretty carved boxes on the wall where the little bird jumped out every hour and half hour.

Kim Rodrigues

April 25, 2017 at 6:49 PM

Glad you liked it :)

Cuckoo

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