Cuatro- Streaks of Twilight

citrine crescent dims
slides back from the bright starry realm
dewy mist descends
streaks of twilight cuts through sky’s rims.

lightmoonmorningquatrain

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sara Etgen-Baker

October 12, 2025 at 2:59 PM

captivating and beautifully written....what a gentle read this was...thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 12, 2025 at 1:24 PM

- So beautiful, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 12, 2025 at 1:10 AM

Oh!! my gosh, this is just so perfect!! I like it very much. Never thought of the moon as a slice of citrus. A very new and fresh perspective for me and how beautifully it dissolves in the sky in twilight colours... For me this is the winner!!! Best wishes for the contest.