Csi

I wrote a haiku for you,
alongside a picture I drew.
Every passerby, 
a witness approved.

Yet! 
Always something comes--

between you and me...

(Once again)
The evidence has been
washed away by the sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 22, 2015 at 5:18 AM
Intriguing poem Red. My daughter is interested in this field of study.
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:34 AM
I know what you mean. Dipped down to 7 degree f this morning here
Barchettadrive Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Would be an interesting field of study! It's just too cold for me to be outstanding in any field, especially today! Brrrrr...
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November 22, 2015 at 3:08 AM
Always something comes between you and me... This line says so much ..and describes why such evidence is always washed away at sea..Mysterious..but one can find conclusions .. Good poem with so much thought. I used to watch CSI on.earlier days..Lately I like too see Twenty-four hours solved mystery . : )
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