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Crystalline Wings

The trodden pathway of brown pebble stones and grass Leads to a hidden meadow below a mountain pass Where soft gentle winds flow endless from blue skies Whispering secrets to agile dragonflies That frolic in sunshine amongst daffodils Wings with touches of gold dip low just for thrills As bumble bees hum; and a bird playfully sings … Watching sun rays reflect on crystalline wings ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/7/2011 12:03:00 PM
Thank you for the congrats Annalise and congratulations are in order for you too I see! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:46:00 AM
Annalise, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:19:00 AM
thanks for the smile....Jack
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Date: 7/12/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on having your priceless poem featured this week. Keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your poetry passion. Wishing many more features. Love to you always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:59:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on "Crystalline Wings" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:27:00 AM
Sounds beautiful. I wish I were there now instead of at work, lol. congrats on your poem being featured this week :)
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Date: 7/10/2011 6:48:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on your featured poem this week on PS...wonderful words my friend to share with us all with luv..hope u are well and happy...
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:17:00 PM
This is beautiful. Your words and phrasing creating the image of dragonflies dancing in the hidden meadow. Everything works. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Excellent writing. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations Annalise, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2011 12:57:00 AM
Such an enchanting write Annalise, congratulation on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:34:00 PM
Another awesome one. I am loving this winners' circle. Highest rating for you! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:59:00 PM
Your hidden meadow sound enchanting. Many congratulations for this top win.
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/24/2011 1:51:00 PM
Hello Annalise, Congratulations on your win my dear, this is wonderful! As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/24/2011 1:06:00 PM
lVery pretty Annalise. Congratulations on your 2nd place. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/24/2011 12:39:00 PM
This is simply too beautiful for words !! Congrats Annalise!!! :)
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:02:00 AM
Had a big smile when I saw your name in the winners' circle, Annalise. Congratulations, dear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Annalise, in your tope 3 spot. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:32:00 AM
absolutely lovely entry for Dr Ram's contest, good luck
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:07:00 AM
This is a very beautiful fantasy-like poem. I'm a huge fan of fantasy and Greek mythology so I can definitely relate. I look forward to reading more.
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:57:00 AM
Hi Audrey. Thanks for the visit. What a lovely picture you paint with those words. 'Crystalline Wings', hangs sweet on the ear, a poem in itself. The very best of luck in the contest. Peace to you. Eamon
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Date: 1/9/2011 2:38:00 PM
Audrey, your rispetto is charming and full of imagery. I love it. Thanks, dear, for one of my first wins in the new year. It looks like all the former contest (winner) pages are now gone!! So strange to see that. LUv, Andrea
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