Audrey Haick Poet Rispetto

Crystalline Wings

The trodden pathway of brown pebble stones and grass 
Leads to a hidden meadow below a mountain pass
Where soft gentle winds flow endless from blue skies
Whispering secrets to agile dragonflies 
That frolic in sunshine amongst daffodils  
Wings with touches of gold dip low just for thrills  
As bumble bees hum; and a bird playfully sings … 
Watching sun rays reflect on crystalline wings
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Timothy Brumley August 7, 2011 at 12:03 PM Thank you for the congrats Annalise and congratulations are in order for you too I see! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

John Freeman August 2, 2011 at 8:46 AM Annalise, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Jack Ross Jr. July 21, 2011 at 9:19 AM thanks for the smile....Jack

Adeleke Adeite July 12, 2011 at 10:39 AM Congrats on having your priceless poem featured this week. Keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your poetry passion. Wishing many more features. Love to you always, Adeleke

Vince Suzadail Jr. July 11, 2011 at 7:59 PM Congrats Annalise on "Crystalline Wings" being featured. Vince

Black Eyed Susan July 11, 2011 at 9:27 AM Sounds beautiful. I wish I were there now instead of at work, lol. congrats on your poem being featured this week :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 10, 2011 at 6:48 PM Congrats Annalise on your featured poem this week on PS...wonderful words my friend to share with us all with luv..hope u are well and happy...

Carol Sunshine Brown July 10, 2011 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Annalise. Love, Carol

Deb Radke January 26, 2011 at 8:17 PM This is beautiful. Your words and phrasing creating the image of dragonflies dancing in the hidden meadow. Everything works. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Excellent writing. Love, Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown January 25, 2011 at 4:29 AM Congratulations Annalise, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels January 25, 2011 at 12:57 AM Such an enchanting write Annalise, congratulation on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2011 at 10:34 PM Another awesome one. I am loving this winners' circle. Highest rating for you! Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan January 24, 2011 at 7:59 PM Your hidden meadow sound enchanting. Many congratulations for this top win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 24, 2011 at 4:41 PM Congrats Annalise on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2011 at 4:07 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Sharon Ruebel January 24, 2011 at 1:51 PM Hello Annalise, Congratulations on your win my dear, this is wonderful! As Always, Shar

Joyce Johnson January 24, 2011 at 1:06 PM lVery pretty Annalise. Congratulations on your 2nd place. Love, joyce

Carrie Richards January 24, 2011 at 12:39 PM This is simply too beautiful for words !! Congrats Annalise!!! :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 24, 2011 at 11:02 AM Had a big smile when I saw your name in the winners' circle, Annalise. Congratulations, dear! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman January 24, 2011 at 10:54 AM Congratulations Annalise, in your tope 3 spot. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta January 24, 2011 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Annalise

Francine Roberts January 13, 2011 at 9:32 AM absolutely lovely entry for Dr Ram's contest, good luck

Robert Marshall Bka - Slimm Williams January 13, 2011 at 3:07 AM This is a very beautiful fantasy-like poem. I'm a huge fan of fantasy and Greek mythology so I can definitely relate. I look forward to reading more.

Eamon Duffin January 12, 2011 at 9:57 AM Hi Audrey. Thanks for the visit. What a lovely picture you paint with those words. 'Crystalline Wings', hangs sweet on the ear, a poem in itself. The very best of luck in the contest. Peace to you. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2011 at 2:38 PM Audrey, your rispetto is charming and full of imagery. I love it. Thanks, dear, for one of my first wins in the new year. It looks like all the former contest (winner) pages are now gone!! So strange to see that. LUv, Andrea

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