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Crystalline Melon

crystalline melon

     sliced into half by sky’s plate…

         a breakable moon







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Joe Maverick: haiku challenge
by nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2025 8:01:00 AM

Just looking around at your haiku. This is one I really liked!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2012 2:53:00 PM

YES, this is splendid imagery and metaphor play. Love it, Nette. Congrats.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 2:07:00 PM

I love this one, Nette!! Congrats on another fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/5/2012 12:24:00 PM

Interesting haiku, well done. Lee

David Williams

Date: 8/5/2012 11:48:00 AM

Nette, congrats on your win, love it...David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2012 1:09:00 PM

Don't know if this reads like a winner for I have not understood his contest..I guess I am a little dense..Good luck though..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Looking forward to reading your entry..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2012 3:22:00 PM

I completely get this!!! haha hahahahah....omw! I am laffing my rear off! Come and read mine now! :) Gwendolen

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/18/2012 12:22:00 PM

Love the crystalline melon. Beautiful and somple images.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/18/2012 12:12:00 PM

This is a glorious write my friend! Nette you have such a great talent of vision and writing it down to describe it to all of us! And I just love it when I get to read it! You did truly spectacular! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2012 11:23:00 AM

Awesome imagery, Nette. Was it for any contest or just inspired by what you saw recently out your window? Tonight they say soutern Utah will be best place to see the sun and moon pass in front of each other! Wish I could see it down there too.