Crystalline #1

For hours I've sat beside this brook
Watching all the fish swim by my hook
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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations Vernette on placing 4th in Brian’s “A couple of Lines” contest with these wonderful fishing lines. Smiles, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations Vernette on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Couple Of Lines". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:18 PM
But that is part of the fisherman's day and it doesn't seem to discourage them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Oh, this is so cute. Poor fisherman not catching a thing. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
Adeite Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Brian’s contest. You are such a wonderful talent here. Please keep your poetry pens flowing with passion. Enjoy your win. Love, Adeleke
Goff Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 10:32 AM
congrats! Vernette! good poem! perfect form!....picniced by a secluded creek in the forest yest! jimbo
George   Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Such an awe- inspiring message so subtlely conveyed in this sensational Crystaline, my friend. Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Vernette. Happy to see you are still writing. Love, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Quite a brilliant saying, Vernette. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
Scripca Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 1:01 PM
It can be interpreted metaphorically too. Congrats, Iolanda
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July 4, 2010 at 11:15 AM
You have me smiling with this one. Reminds me of all the fishing I did as a child. I was fascinated watching those fish swim. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen
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July 4, 2010 at 10:34 AM
Congrats Vernette on your winning poem in Brian's contest with this awesome write and win for u to enjoy.. as u celebrate your 4th of July holiday weekend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation.. AlohA...
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