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Crystalline #1

For hours I've sat beside this brook Watching all the fish swim by my hook

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 4:54:00 AM

Congratulations Vernette on placing 4th in Brian’s “A couple of Lines” contest with these wonderful fishing lines. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 4:36:00 AM

Congratulations Vernette on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Couple Of Lines". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/5/2010 1:18:00 PM

But that is part of the fisherman's day and it doesn't seem to discourage them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:10:00 PM

Oh, this is so cute. Poor fisherman not catching a thing. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 12:33:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win in Brian’s contest. You are such a wonderful talent here. Please keep your poetry pens flowing with passion. Enjoy your win. Love, Adeleke

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/5/2010 10:32:00 AM

congrats! Vernette! good poem! perfect form!....picniced by a secluded creek in the forest yest! jimbo

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:18:00 AM

Such an awe- inspiring message so subtlely conveyed in this sensational Crystaline, my friend. Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Vernette. Happy to see you are still writing. Love, Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 7/4/2010 5:23:00 PM

Quite a brilliant saying, Vernette. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 7/4/2010 1:01:00 PM

It can be interpreted metaphorically too. Congrats, Iolanda

Date: 7/4/2010 11:15:00 AM

You have me smiling with this one. Reminds me of all the fishing I did as a child. I was fascinated watching those fish swim. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 10:34:00 AM

Congrats Vernette on your winning poem in Brian's contest with this awesome write and win for u to enjoy.. as u celebrate your 4th of July holiday weekend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation.. AlohA...