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Crystal Wind Chimes

Crystal wind chimes to hang outside To bring cheer when her brother died She’d hear the tinkling with each breeze Melodic tones put her at ease And helped to cast her cares aside For so long she’d stood by his side But God had listened as she cried And he urged me to give her these Crystal wind chimes Think of him as crystals collide Soft, sweet whispers blessings confide No longer does her warm heart freeze She hears his voice upon each breeze – Crystal wind chimes
*Entry for Brian's Top 20 Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 9:48:00 PM
THis one I also think I have seen before but my comment is not down below. it's awesome, Carolyn. A well deserved win here. Congrats.
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:17:00 AM
Good Rondeau Carolyn. Congrats on your win.One Love~O.O.
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st place win in Brian's contest.
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:21:00 AM
My heart goes out with each verse...simply beautiful !!! Congratulations on the win!!!!
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:44:00 AM
Glad you are in the winners circle. this is so good. congrats harry
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:37:00 AM
Congratulation on your superb win for your beautiful poem. Thanks, bl
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:34:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful write Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:41:00 AM
wonderful Carolyn, a reminder of someone dear, this is so apt to me and i'm sure to many others here on soup. congrats. harry
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:49:00 PM
How lucky you are that he still speaks to you. A wonderful poem Carolyn. Congratulations
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:36:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your 2nd place win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:42:00 PM
Carolyn...the title is captivating and the story within is so tender. Congrats on this rondeau win! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/4/2012 1:32:00 PM
Again, another quality, and beautiful poem by you!! Congratulations to you , dear Carolyn! Hope you are having a wonderful beginning to 2012!
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Date: 1/4/2012 12:18:00 AM
I''m so glad you won high honors with this one. congratulations and thanks again. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/3/2012 10:53:00 PM
This is just so beautiful and touching.Congratulations on your win Carolyn...love,Deb
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Date: 12/26/2011 1:31:00 PM
Oh I did not realize that this was about my windchimes. They are lovely and so is your poem. i see now why they reminded you of me. Love you. Joyce
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful poem by you Caroline.Enjoyed very much.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:29:00 AM
oops!Sorry"Carolyn"
Date: 12/9/2011 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful, Carolyn! Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:47:00 PM
Wow Carolyn-This is a wonderful entry to Cyndi's contest....just beautiful
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:37:00 PM
What a lovely idea and I'm sure your special gift will comfort her - if I send you an xmas ecard for her, will you forward it please?
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Date: 12/9/2011 1:09:00 PM
It's a beautiful idea and a beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:17:00 PM
Such a pleasent write that almost makes my windchimes in my window move... with love Michael
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