Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

Crystal Season

"It's night before it's afternoon.
 December is here before it's June."



Crystals had fluttered to the ground
And settled gently all around,
White as moistened quilt of feather
Upon the pale evening's heather...
Bare now after November’s hand
Stripped the fields while tints disband, 
Endowing the trees with light finesse
And silver stars of gracefulness.


Casarah Nance 's Dr. Seuss Contest
by nette onclaud
8/16/2015

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Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 10:07 AM A gorgeous write! Congrats.

Sneha Rv August 21, 2015 at 9:33 AM This is so lovely, dear Nette!! All the best for the contest!! :D :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 17, 2015 at 10:49 PM Wonderful quote n a superb poem dear nette! Congrats on big win!

Casarah Nance August 17, 2015 at 4:01 PM This was beautiful! You have taken Dr. Seuss inspiration to a whole new level, capturing it in reality! Nicely done!

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 3:24 PM Nette, congrats in "Casarah Nance"s" contest... SKAT LOVE

Emile Pinet August 17, 2015 at 11:26 AM A pleasant sounding poem that brings back happy childhood memories. Congratulations on your win! Emile.

Carol Eastman August 17, 2015 at 10:53 AM WOW! The most elegant Dr. Seuss ever! Great write! Congrats on the win!

Edward Ebbs August 17, 2015 at 10:25 AM Nicely done nette, congrats!

James Peranteau August 17, 2015 at 9:43 AM This is totally awesome dear poet ! Every word leads to the next provoking thought! You've heard it from your's truly ! Loved it, I have not read all of the entries, yet, without prejudice; this write should top the list in contest ! Have a wonderful week my friend Nette....much love, james

Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 9:00 AM I loved this one on the first read nette - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2015 at 7:48 PM wow, this is a beauty. This contest is mainly bringing out funny or fun poems . Yours is the most beautiful one I have seen, so I am sure you will get a great score for this unique gem.

Ken Carroll August 16, 2015 at 6:10 PM Well done Nette.. Good luck in the contest!

Carrie Richards August 16, 2015 at 4:49 PM I hadn't seen the quote before, but your poem fits so perfectly... Quote or no quote, your poem is a winner !! PS.....and also, like others, I want to thank you for my placement in your contest, and also alerting me to adding my name, as requested. I appreciate the chance to qualify !! :)

Constance La France August 16, 2015 at 1:40 PM Nette, I love the quote and the poem is really pretty, a7 and thanks for visiting my poem, lover of writing and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your, a prized refrain contest, I am honored

Anu Nayak August 16, 2015 at 1:23 PM An awesome poem!!! I enjoyed it ! Dear Nette Onclaud:-) Good luck for the contest! I read a winner!!!! .....a 7!!!!......love, Anu:-)

Juaneco Torrente August 16, 2015 at 10:08 AM I sometimes need patience to wait for the right moment to come. You winged this with your metaphors and scenes of a season to complete its cycles. Masterful!

Jan Allison August 16, 2015 at 8:04 AM Delightful imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis August 16, 2015 at 5:09 AM Captivating images that mesmerize the soul, dear nette! Good luck, although you do not need!

Mark Woods August 16, 2015 at 2:08 AM A beautiful tranquil poem with breath taking imagery.