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Crystal Season

"It's night before it's afternoon.
 December is here before it's June."



Crystals had fluttered to the ground
And settled gently all around,
White as moistened quilt of feather
Upon the pale evening's heather...
Bare now after November’s hand
Stripped the fields while tints disband, 
Endowing the trees with light finesse
And silver stars of gracefulness.


Casarah Nance 's Dr. Seuss Contest
by nette onclaud
8/16/2015

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2015

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2015 10:07:00 AM A gorgeous write! Congrats. Login to Reply

Sneha Rv Date: 8/21/2015 9:33:00 AM This is so lovely, dear Nette!! All the best for the contest!! :D :D Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/17/2015 10:49:00 PM Wonderful quote n a superb poem dear nette! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 8/17/2015 4:01:00 PM This was beautiful! You have taken Dr. Seuss inspiration to a whole new level, capturing it in reality! Nicely done! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/17/2015 3:24:00 PM Nette, congrats in "Casarah Nance"s" contest... SKAT LOVE Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 8/17/2015 11:26:00 AM A pleasant sounding poem that brings back happy childhood memories. Congratulations on your win! Emile. Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 8/17/2015 10:53:00 AM WOW! The most elegant Dr. Seuss ever! Great write! Congrats on the win! Login to Reply

Edward Ebbs Date: 8/17/2015 10:25:00 AM Nicely done nette, congrats! Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 8/17/2015 9:43:00 AM This is totally awesome dear poet ! Every word leads to the next provoking thought! You've heard it from your's truly ! Loved it, I have not read all of the entries, yet, without prejudice; this write should top the list in contest ! Have a wonderful week my friend Nette....much love, james Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/17/2015 9:00:00 AM I loved this one on the first read nette - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2015 7:48:00 PM wow, this is a beauty. This contest is mainly bringing out funny or fun poems . Yours is the most beautiful one I have seen, so I am sure you will get a great score for this unique gem. Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 8/16/2015 6:10:00 PM Well done Nette.. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/16/2015 4:49:00 PM I hadn't seen the quote before, but your poem fits so perfectly... Quote or no quote, your poem is a winner !! PS.....and also, like others, I want to thank you for my placement in your contest, and also alerting me to adding my name, as requested. I appreciate the chance to qualify !! :) Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/16/2015 1:40:00 PM Nette, I love the quote and the poem is really pretty, a7 and thanks for visiting my poem, lover of writing and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your, a prized refrain contest, I am honored Login to Reply

Anu Nayak Date: 8/16/2015 1:23:00 PM An awesome poem!!! I enjoyed it ! Dear Nette Onclaud:-) Good luck for the contest! I read a winner!!!! .....a 7!!!!......love, Anu:-) Login to Reply

Juaneco Torrente Date: 8/16/2015 10:08:00 AM I sometimes need patience to wait for the right moment to come. You winged this with your metaphors and scenes of a season to complete its cycles. Masterful! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2015 8:04:00 AM Delightful imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/16/2015 5:09:00 AM Captivating images that mesmerize the soul, dear nette! Good luck, although you do not need! Login to Reply

Mark Woods Date: 8/16/2015 2:08:00 AM A beautiful tranquil poem with breath taking imagery. Login to Reply