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Crystal Raindrops Fall So Nice

Crystal raindrops fall so nice, drop on trees tip tap tip. After getting heavenly touch, emerald leaves dance so sweet. Crystal raindrops fall so nice, drop on river lee la lee. After drinking heavenly juice, enchanted rivers flow with glee. Crystal raindrops fall so nice, drop on garden zip zap zip. After getting tender touch, flowers paint red, blue, pink. Crystal raindrops fall so nice, drop on field rim jhim rim. After getting invitation, queen frogs sing with rhyme. Crystal raindrops fall so nice, drop on ocean tip tip tap, After getting lovely kiss, inky ocean looks so smart. ================== For 'All the little pieces' contest Sponsored by Broken Wings Date: 18/06/2016

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Old Man Emu

Date: 9/26/2016 3:30:00 PM

Great write Manmath, enjoyed your take on little pieces. Regards, Craig

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 7:48:00 AM

Oh so beautifully written Manmath - I love the impact of the repeated line:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/22/2016 2:39:00 PM

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. I COULD HEAR, SMELL AND ALMOST TASTE THE FALLING RAIN.A7

Timothy Hicks

Date: 9/20/2016 10:44:00 PM

The "tip tap tip" parts add a nice cadence to this rainy day poem. I can hear the drops. Well penned.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/20/2016 11:53:00 PM

Thanks dear.

Sarban Bhattacharya

Date: 9/20/2016 8:32:00 AM

Beautiful imagery with vivid onomatopoeia.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2016 12:41:00 PM

- I can see your beautiful painting, Manmath - Wonderful written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2016 12:41:00 PM

Good luck in the contest :) !!!!

Jean Murray

Date: 9/19/2016 8:43:00 AM

Monsoon arrived at last Manmath? Sounds like it. Heavenly poem.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/19/2016 10:51:00 AM

Friend like 'Jean Murray'is with me, monsoon will definitely come. If required father of monsoon will also come. Thanks a lot for ur friendly visit..............// hugs

Afroze Ali

Date: 9/19/2016 4:27:00 AM

Happy rains to you Manmath. Enjoyed the season you've portrayed.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/19/2016 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Afroze. Ur 'The Bougainvillea Tree'is very very beautiful. It is a great poem.........// with love.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2016 7:39:00 PM

A lovely piece.;0).

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/19/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/18/2016 1:56:00 PM

This poem is delightful Manmath. I love the rain. It's so refreshing! Lovely! ; )

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/18/2016 7:20:00 PM

Thanks a lot.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/18/2016 8:41:00 AM

A beautiful picture of the rain. Rejoicing at its wonder and vitality... lovely Manmath

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/18/2016 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for ur friendly visit.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2016 8:39:00 AM

A beautiful Sunday to you my friend. Yes, I am back to comment and pick up where I left off. I love the sound of fresh fallen rain drops. I feel like the innovation is complete. Haha, a kinky ocean, receiving the best kiss by nature... hugs... Linda

Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/18/2016 9:50:00 AM

Tahnks a lot for ur encouraging comment.