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Crystal Memories

There’s no one at the rendez-vous Not a star lighting the sky tonight Just the thick blanket of midnight blue As thoughts of him inundate her heart Trying to compute their being apart Crystal clear memories so bright Her soul so naive to love untrue How could she not spot the faintest clue Her crystal memories have a bitter bite His name will now be not more than taboo Really thought he was her counterpart All those times calling her sweetheart Cupid’s arrow struck with all its might Wishing she could undo her new tattoo AP: 1st place 2022 Submitted on August 11, 2018 for contest RHYME TIME 6 - VERSES OF METAPHORS sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 9/11/2018 6:58:00 AM
great last line sweet Line :) lovely rhythm and rhyme too...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Date: 9/11/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura. Most appreciated. Lovely contest.
Date: 8/13/2018 10:14:00 PM
Wonderful Poem. I can relate to some bad memories being crystal clear. They are always there to remind us clearly of the past.
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:28:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 8/12/2018 10:16:00 PM
Oh, that last line gave me a jolt! So unexpected, yet it fits perfectly, Line.
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Date: 8/12/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 8/12/2018 2:17:00 AM
Really captured those feelings well Line.Great work!
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Date: 8/12/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thank you, Luciano, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/11/2018 6:45:00 PM
Great last line: my new tattoo. Another metaphor there too!! WEll done.
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:23:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/11/2018 5:21:00 PM
I really like this Line. The last line really kicks it in! Well done!.........80)
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Date: 8/11/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pat, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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