Crystal Light

Shun me not for without you I'm neither rain or sky 
whilst I fold up my senses and slowly die 
life is never perfect in fact its a far cry 
only brave survive dear so lets take it high

to the ends of the earth where stars have no fear  
when sun fades its to allow moon to draw near 
does love oblige sometime, just to dry a tear
yes it does that is how it keeps us in the clear 

include me in the breaths you take every day 
let me be your light, your truth and your way 
close the curtains of hate know what they say 
the thin line between the two can be so gray 

Shun me not for without you I am neither day or night 
let us seize this love and be, each others crystal light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Laurie Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 6:46 PM
Hello Vie ... a perfect topic for a sonnet, and a fine sonnet indeed Vie - Lindsay
Anaya Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 5:57 PM
So romantic and unique! Love it Mystic Rose. Anaya
Y. Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 4:30 PM
WoW! Mystic, You’ve penned such a well written write. Good advice in your final stanza. Well done. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
Jayasankar Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 1:25 AM
Aw... I just loved reading every line of this beautiful write dear Vie... tender words of devoted love... in Sonnet form.. A Fav... Hugs... ~ Ani
Rose  Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Thank you dear Anitha, I lvoe sonnets, especially romantic ones, thank you for your kind visit, and generosity of heart :)
Horsman Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Stunning is the first word that comes to mind, your poetry, Vie is like a magnet, draws the reader in and doesn't let go till well after the end...
Rose  Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Your too kind Harry, thankyou for the compliment, I'm blushing
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