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Crystal Light

Shun me not for without you I'm neither rain or sky whilst I fold up my senses and slowly die life is never perfect in fact its a far cry only brave survive dear so lets take it high to the ends of the earth where stars have no fear when sun fades its to allow moon to draw near does love oblige sometime, just to dry a tear yes it does that is how it keeps us in the clear include me in the breaths you take every day let me be your light, your truth and your way close the curtains of hate know what they say the thin line between the two can be so gray Shun me not for without you I am neither day or night let us seize this love and be, each others crystal light.

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Date: 2/19/2022 6:46:00 PM
Hello Vie ... a perfect topic for a sonnet, and a fine sonnet indeed Vie - Lindsay
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Date: 2/18/2022 5:57:00 PM
So romantic and unique! Love it Mystic Rose. Anaya
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:30:00 PM
WoW! Mystic, You’ve penned such a well written write. Good advice in your final stanza. Well done. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
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Date: 2/18/2022 1:25:00 AM
Aw... I just loved reading every line of this beautiful write dear Vie... tender words of devoted love... in Sonnet form.. A Fav... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 2/18/2022 2:12:00 PM
Thank you dear Anitha, I lvoe sonnets, especially romantic ones, thank you for your kind visit, and generosity of heart :)
Date: 2/17/2022 7:26:00 PM
Stunning is the first word that comes to mind, your poetry, Vie is like a magnet, draws the reader in and doesn't let go till well after the end...
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Date: 2/18/2022 2:12:00 PM
Your too kind Harry, thankyou for the compliment, I'm blushing

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