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Crystal Egg

Wise man offered rare crystal stone carnelian egg in bright orange hue, known to rejuvenate one’s home its power was said to clear the view, and guard chi from negative moods. When hubby roared and slammed the door; I held the egg to cast out feuds, his grumbling turned into a purr. Chanting on it like myth’s refrain, most valued gem, polished to glow; till sweet mate grew batty again, prized egg, he dug under deep snow. © *chi--- energy force

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/5/2015 10:19:00 PM
Nette I went to your last email and it said something different than 7, so it confused me and I believed you wanted 9:15. Your last email to me said between 9 and 11. Anyway, it's ready now. Go see.
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Date: 6/11/2012 9:38:00 AM
Nice witty write on this egg Nette. Not so long ago he could bury it in the snow. Few places still getting the odd snowfall which is unusual. Garden is in--- so hoping for sunny days ahead. love phyl
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:48:00 AM
hahaha, a very witty one, Nette. Enjoyed this a lot. Hugs, Dinda
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Date: 6/10/2012 8:48:00 PM
hahaha, I like how you ended this funny with hubbie burying the crystal egg. It's so good to see you back, Sweetie.
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Date: 6/10/2012 7:28:00 PM
A great write on different kind of egg Nette.Enjoyed the read
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:21:00 PM
A different sort of egg, great idea. This is why I enjoy these contests so much
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:03:00 PM
aww lovley i liek it, it reminds me of whenw e used to dye eggs a s kids, thanks for your kind comments on my dedication poem God bless from diane
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Date: 6/10/2012 1:45:00 PM
Eggcellent...very different. BG
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Date: 6/10/2012 1:25:00 PM
..lol...(A bit of a chicken that laying "crystal egg" )well done nette - oxox hugggs Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/10/2012 1:24:00 PM
what a fantastic write my dear friend! I really enjoyed the flow and wisdom of your poem! I have seen these eggs and they are quite beautiful, though I don't know if they truly work but I would give it a try! I just love your clever poetic work of art Nette! Great Job!!
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Date: 6/10/2012 1:11:00 PM
Got a chuckle..It did not fix that man did it..Good luck in the contest...Delicate egg will float to the top of the winners' list..Thanks for the kind review....Sara
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Date: 6/10/2012 12:54:00 PM
Nette, good take on the theme, good luck..David
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