Aditi Mishra Poet Free verse

Crystal Dreams

Fervent sandstorms of daylight
 breathe their last on hot topanga
distant shores rumble with breeze
 splashing colours of blooming dusk.

Oh my blue crystal dreams so delicate
 dance on sumptuous serene waves
silver stars on the glass in carmen
 sprinkle in slithering hush to sleep.

July 8, 2020

Strand Completely New (7) Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
~Winner: 1st Place

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Sam Kauffman July 12, 2020 at 10:48 PM Lovely images of the sea, the wind and the stars - delicate as the colors of the sunset. This is dreamy Congratulations on your top placement! Aditi Mishra July 13, 2020 at 9:00 AM I am grateful you love my muse Sam. Thank you for such kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)

Brenda Chiri July 10, 2020 at 7:11 PM Congrats on your top win!;) Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:09 AM Thank you for appreciating Brenda :)

John Watt July 10, 2020 at 5:55 PM Nice win for you today, Aditi. It brings a smile to see this at #1 ~ John Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:09 AM Thank you for your kind blessings my friend :)

Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2020 at 4:03 PM Elegance personified. Congratulations Aditi. Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:08 AM Thank you for your kind appreciation Caren. Much love :)

Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2020 at 3:31 PM Congratulations, Aditi! Your crystal dream imagery is beautiful! Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:08 AM Thank you for your lovely appreciation Kim :) Blessings!

Jack Horne July 10, 2020 at 2:44 PM what a beautiful write Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:08 AM Thank you Jack :)

Paula Goldsmith July 10, 2020 at 11:47 AM Congratulations on your win. Was your pen writing this as you dreamed???? "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day........... Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:07 AM You are always gracious with your comments Paula. Thank you for your appreciation. Much love :)

Jeanne Mcgee July 10, 2020 at 9:35 AM a fervent congrats on your top win with this look into a distant land so beautifully penned. xoxo Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:07 AM Thank you for such kind words of appreciation Jenne. glad to hear from you. Blessings and love :)

Frances Schiavina July 10, 2020 at 9:29 AM Best congratulations on top place winning masterpiece poem! Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:06 AM Thank you for your kind appreciation Frances. Blessings :)

Krish Radhakrishna July 10, 2020 at 8:43 AM Great write! Your choice of words is just perfect! Congrats on your top win! Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:06 AM Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Krish. Blessings :)

Regina Mcintosh July 10, 2020 at 6:02 AM Beautiful :) Love this. God bless you Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:06 AM Thank you for your kind wishes Gina. Blessings and love :)

Edward Ibeh July 10, 2020 at 4:18 AM Splendid poem with striking imagery throughout! Congratulations on your first place win, Aditi:-) Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:05 AM Glad you loved it Edward. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings

Bryan Norton July 10, 2020 at 4:16 AM You hit all the right notes. Congratulations on your big win. Best wishes, Bryan Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:05 AM Thank you for your kind wishes Bryan! :) Blessings

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2020 at 3:45 AM Another beautifully crafted gem from your pen Aditi. Congratulations on your deserving First placement! Blessings xxoo Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:04 AM Glad you love my words Connie. Thank you for such generous appreciation. Much love :)

JC Brul July 10, 2020 at 2:47 AM Oh, so lovely !! Congratulations on your top win! Keep the ink pouring! Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:04 AM Thank you for such gracious appreciation my dear. Much love :)

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2020 at 8:13 PM wow, this is SO pretty!! Way to come up with a new poem, Aditi! Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:03 AM Glad you loved my muse Andre! Thank you for your appreciation :)

John Watt July 9, 2020 at 7:59 PM I love all your "S" words and pairings, especially in stanza 2. Almost as though they are saying "shh" go back to sleep and dream. I am curious what a topanga is? This poem shines brightly, I wish you all the best ~ John John Watt July 11, 2020 at 7:32 PM Thank you for clarifying about 'topanga'. It is a beautiful word. There is a Topanga Canyon here in California, and it begins where hills meet the ocean in Los Angeles. Aditi Mishra July 11, 2020 at 8:03 AM I am honored you observe each word in my muse my friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Topanga is actually a name that symbolizes the place where the mountain meets the ocean. It is a popular term with professional painters. :)

Panagiota Romios July 9, 2020 at 10:02 AM Best wishes, Aditi. You are a mistress with a shining quill. And high hopes for you in the contest! Panagiota xx Aditi Mishra July 9, 2020 at 10:04 AM Thank you for your visit and kind words dear Panagiota. Much love :)

Jenish Somadas July 9, 2020 at 12:09 AM Your selection and usages of words are a delight to read Aditi.. Good luck.. Aditi Mishra July 9, 2020 at 1:05 AM Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation Jenish :)