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Crystal Dreams

Fervent sandstorms of daylight breathe their last on hot topanga distant shores rumble with breeze splashing colours of blooming dusk. Oh my blue crystal dreams so delicate dance on sumptuous serene waves silver stars on the glass in carmen sprinkle in slithering hush to sleep. July 8, 2020 Strand Completely New (7) Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: 1st Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/12/2020 10:48:00 PM

Lovely images of the sea, the wind and the stars - delicate as the colors of the sunset. This is dreamy Congratulations on your top placement!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 9:00:00 AM

I am grateful you love my muse Sam. Thank you for such kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/10/2020 7:11:00 PM

Congrats on your top win!;)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:09:00 AM

Thank you for appreciating Brenda :)

John Watt

Date: 7/10/2020 5:55:00 PM

Nice win for you today, Aditi. It brings a smile to see this at #1 ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:09:00 AM

Thank you for your kind blessings my friend :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 4:03:00 PM

Elegance personified. Congratulations Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:08:00 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation Caren. Much love :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/10/2020 3:31:00 PM

Congratulations, Aditi! Your crystal dream imagery is beautiful!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:08:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely appreciation Kim :) Blessings!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/10/2020 2:44:00 PM

what a beautiful write

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Jack :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/10/2020 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Was your pen writing this as you dreamed???? "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day...........

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:07:00 AM

You are always gracious with your comments Paula. Thank you for your appreciation. Much love :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/10/2020 9:35:00 AM

a fervent congrats on your top win with this look into a distant land so beautifully penned. xoxo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:07:00 AM

Thank you for such kind words of appreciation Jenne. glad to hear from you. Blessings and love :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 7/10/2020 9:29:00 AM

Best congratulations on top place winning masterpiece poem!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation Frances. Blessings :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/10/2020 8:43:00 AM

Great write! Your choice of words is just perfect! Congrats on your top win!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Krish. Blessings :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/10/2020 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful :) Love this. God bless you

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes Gina. Blessings and love :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/10/2020 4:18:00 AM

Splendid poem with striking imagery throughout! Congratulations on your first place win, Aditi:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:05:00 AM

Glad you loved it Edward. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings

Bryan Norton

Date: 7/10/2020 4:16:00 AM

You hit all the right notes. Congratulations on your big win. Best wishes, Bryan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:05:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes Bryan! :) Blessings

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/10/2020 3:45:00 AM

Another beautifully crafted gem from your pen Aditi. Congratulations on your deserving First placement! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:04:00 AM

Glad you love my words Connie. Thank you for such generous appreciation. Much love :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/10/2020 2:47:00 AM

Oh, so lovely !! Congratulations on your top win! Keep the ink pouring!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:04:00 AM

Thank you for such gracious appreciation my dear. Much love :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2020 8:13:00 PM

wow, this is SO pretty!! Way to come up with a new poem, Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:03:00 AM

Glad you loved my muse Andre! Thank you for your appreciation :)

John Watt

Date: 7/9/2020 7:59:00 PM

I love all your "S" words and pairings, especially in stanza 2. Almost as though they are saying "shh" go back to sleep and dream. I am curious what a topanga is? This poem shines brightly, I wish you all the best ~ John

John Watt
Date: 7/11/2020 7:32:00 PM

Thank you for clarifying about 'topanga'. It is a beautiful word. There is a Topanga Canyon here in California, and it begins where hills meet the ocean in Los Angeles.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:03:00 AM

I am honored you observe each word in my muse my friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Topanga is actually a name that symbolizes the place where the mountain meets the ocean. It is a popular term with professional painters. :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/9/2020 10:02:00 AM

Best wishes, Aditi. You are a mistress with a shining quill. And high hopes for you in the contest! Panagiota xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/9/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind words dear Panagiota. Much love :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/9/2020 12:09:00 AM

Your selection and usages of words are a delight to read Aditi.. Good luck..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/9/2020 1:05:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation Jenish :)