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Crystal Dove

I rode upon a crystal dove Straight into the arms of love Offered up my heart and soul Every man should have a goal I have found honor in my life I respect and adore my wife For her these words are true I am the thing’s I say and do To open the lock turn the key Take a look up inside of me For I have nothing left to hide Love has helped me find pride As for my life these words are true I’m proud my heart belongs to you Brian suggested I should try a Free Form Sonnet - Written for my wife Antoinette - Her love transformed me into the man I am today - I'm very proud and very lucky to hold her heart

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 3:56:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Marie Harrison

Date: 5/31/2010 5:26:00 PM

So beautiful your sonnet was. What a lucky girl. Thank you for sharing.

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2010 5:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for your ever kind comments. As you have noticed many of my poems, as i call them are about so many subjects. I am one of these souls who can retain information. Many of the War pieces i have written is knowledge i knew when i was 11 or 12. History is a big part of me. My ancestors go back as far as Lord Nelson. Hardy is on my mothers side. Thank you once again Michael >> James

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2010 5:14:00 PM

Michael, the title followed by the poem itself is simply beautiful. Your words are just wonderful >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 5/25/2010 12:42:00 AM

Great sonnet poetry Michael,your opening couplet encapsulates this your song of love.Rgds Brian.More power to your poetic elbow !

Date: 5/23/2010 6:57:00 AM

What a wonderful tribute to your wife. She must loved reading it. Beautiful. Best wishes with your final. You have accomplished a lot this year my friend. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2010 7:36:00 AM

God has blessed you with true love and I'm so glad you appreciate it, MJ. It's a rare find and I'll bet Antoinette loves this poem too. Great write! Love, Carolyn

Sue Mason

Date: 5/21/2010 9:05:00 PM

Beautifully done, Michael and a wonderful tribute to your love !!