Crystal Blue Waters

crystal blue waters twinkling away,
a thousand gems sparkle and sway,
fish jumping high with incredible joy,
a feeding frenzy and not being coy,
children skimming stones across
wanting to win and not be a loss,
rocks protruding from waters deep,
keeping boaters awake and not asleep,
picnic tables line up along river shore,
hungry people eating more and more,
evening sun reminds all the day is done,
crystal blue waters fade away ending fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 15, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Very charming and whimsical, Sonia, and I'm glad to see it in the winner's circle again - this one takes me right back, and I love to visit "that" place! Congrats and blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
Walker Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Gregory, thank you for your support. ~ Sonia
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February 9, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Congrats on your win, Sonia.
Walker Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Line, always appreciate your support. ~ Sonia
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February 8, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Lovely poem, Sonia. CONGRATS! Janice
Walker Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Janice, this poem makes me look forward to warmer weather. Thank you for the congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.
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February 7, 2018 at 7:58 PM
congratulations on your placement. It is a delightful read on a holiday at the lake. Brings back memories of camping vacations we took as a family.
Walker Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Reason, thank you for your thoughtful comment on my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters.' ~ Sonia
Barden Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Reminds me of childhood days when I lived on the lake here in Maine, (and where I used to take my kids) ... love it! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
Walker Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Gregory, thank you for your kind reply and congratulations on my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters.' I grew up in Connecticut and enjoyed the lakes, rivers and seashore for many years. Thank you. ~ Sonia, a Connecticut nutmegger
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September 24, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Sonia, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
Walker Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Broken Wings, thank you for your positive and uplifting comment on my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters. ~ Sonia
Sands Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 7:31 PM
I really enjoyed this one Sonia :) Thanks for sharing!
Walker Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Heidi, glad you enjoyed my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters.' ~ Sonia
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