Get Your Premium Membership

Crystal Blue Waters

crystal blue waters twinkling away, a thousand gems sparkle and sway, fish jumping high with incredible joy, a feeding frenzy and not being coy, children skimming stones across wanting to win and not be a loss, rocks protruding from waters deep, keeping boaters awake and not asleep, picnic tables line up along river shore, hungry people eating more and more, evening sun reminds all the day is done, crystal blue waters fade away ending fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/15/2018 11:20:00 PM
Very charming and whimsical, Sonia, and I'm glad to see it in the winner's circle again - this one takes me right back, and I love to visit "that" place! Congrats and blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 2/16/2018 10:35:00 AM
Gregory, thank you for your support. ~ Sonia
Date: 2/9/2018 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sonia.
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 2/9/2018 10:44:00 AM
Line, always appreciate your support. ~ Sonia
Date: 2/8/2018 3:35:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sonia. CONGRATS! Janice
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 2/8/2018 5:32:00 PM
Janice, this poem makes me look forward to warmer weather. Thank you for the congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 2/7/2018 7:58:00 PM
congratulations on your placement. It is a delightful read on a holiday at the lake. Brings back memories of camping vacations we took as a family.
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 2/7/2018 9:05:00 PM
Reason, thank you for your thoughtful comment on my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters.' ~ Sonia
Date: 9/24/2017 6:46:00 PM
Reminds me of childhood days when I lived on the lake here in Maine, (and where I used to take my kids) ... love it! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 9/24/2017 7:55:00 PM
Gregory, thank you for your kind reply and congratulations on my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters.' I grew up in Connecticut and enjoyed the lakes, rivers and seashore for many years. Thank you. ~ Sonia, a Connecticut nutmegger
Date: 9/24/2017 8:24:00 AM
Sonia, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 9/24/2017 7:57:00 PM
Broken Wings, thank you for your positive and uplifting comment on my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters. ~ Sonia
Date: 8/8/2017 7:31:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one Sonia :) Thanks for sharing!
Login to Reply
Walker Avatar
Sonia Walker
Date: 8/8/2017 7:56:00 PM
Heidi, glad you enjoyed my poem, 'Crystal Blue Waters.' ~ Sonia

Book: Shattered Sighs