Crystal

"CRYSTAL" The beauty I am came at a large cost. Sadness fills my heart for the love I lost. The tattoo on my face is a mark of his love. His love disappeared from me on wings of a dove. This beautiful ring he placed it on my finger. Said his love for me would never linger. As he looked at me and walked away. My heart was broken from that very day. I sit her all alone with nothing to share. There's no one to love me and no one to care. Teresa Skyles Entered in Constane La france~a rambling poet~"tell her story"contest

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/11/2011 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest of Constance, Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/11/2011 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your Crystal winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" Teresa. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/11/2011 7:05:00 AM

Such a sad story behind your poem about Crystal's loss, Teresa. You did a wonderful job with this. Congratulations on your placement in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 12:40:00 AM

I like that phrase Nette used to describe this. Broodingly wonderful. and so it was. Glad to see it here again today. Congrats on HM. LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/10/2011 9:51:00 PM

broodingly wonderful, teresa.. CONGRATS for the great citation!..:) huggs, nette

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/10/2011 9:17:00 PM

Sweet, sad story Teresa. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/10/2011 6:12:00 PM

Excellent entry, Teresa. Great name for that beauty. Awesome piece. Thanks for your gracious comments. luv Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2011 5:45:00 PM

Congrats Teresa on your HM in Tell Her Story contest my friend.. an exciting entry with a dynamic name too.. enjoyed with luv as u enjoy your special honor my friend...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:59:00 PM

oh, so you made her sad and heartbroken. That is an interesting way to take it. Gosh, I hope I can think of something to do for the contest. I see it is filling up fast. EEEEKS If I only did not have to go to work each day!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:59:00 PM

ps loved the name you gave her, Crystal!