Crystal

I gazed, silent, at my notebook.
I gazed for hours seeking a word;
a word that's worth your eye colour.

Your eyes are a mystic maze of colours;
a forest under the sea:
ambiguous, profound, 
transparent, Brilliant!
A warm touch, a melody,
a breeze that smells of pine,
a fresh literary genre, a history, 
a greek myth I never get tired of hearing.

Your eyes are two crystals 
manipulating colors;
Illusive, surreal.
Your eyes are worth a million words,
yet not a word shall encompass 
the full charm of your eye colour.
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January 7, 2024 at 7:45 AM
This is so beautiful how you’ve described this mystical and captivating eyes in such a poetic manner making your words flow in such eloquence. Many lines stood out for me especially “ Your eyes are two crystals manipulating colors; Illusive, surreal. Your eyes are worth a million words,“ so heartfelt and so deeply touching! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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