Crying To Tell Something

CRYING TO TELL SOMETHING


You cry to communicate, you need something
I feel more patient now and do a learning
You don’t have spoken words to tell me what you feel
Feet-moving, hand-reaching, and head-shaking are what you tell

Cries are the words, you want me to understand
Giving up is not the answer to what you want
Give me time to think about what is in your cries
High and low, you’re crying a sign that I should try

While you cry so intensely, my heart bleeds severely
Be calm now, my loving arms are now around you
While holding you, I know you are in lonely
So let me hug you and sing a song for you

While everything is done, I give you all the time
To notice the change and feel the difference
Hear my calming voice to know my presence
I will tap your back and pass my hand on your forehead

Chorus:

I will let you feel that the world is safer
With us your parents by your side
It takes two people to communicate
One to talk and the other to listen

Refrain:

You are crying to tell me something
That you want me to do before sleeping
Give me time to understand your own language
This is the way of our own tutelage



Written and posted in voicesnet.com poetry site on March 17, 2008.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/5/2010 11:40:00 AM
This is very sweet, Noel :) could only imagine how lovely the melody is with this one...
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:00:00 PM
Very nice....cute....enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 4/3/2010 4:41:00 AM
I hear the lilt of your most pleasant dialect!LIght & Love
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Date: 3/30/2010 1:02:00 AM
I remember those days when my kids had colic. I still don't know what they wanted to this very day. haha. Anyway, it's a very enjoyable poem you wrote. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 3/29/2010 7:46:00 AM
Love this Noel...!! Those cries do mean something......how lovely is this attempt to understand and communicate back to the sweet child, to make them feel safe, secure and so loved. Lovely lullaby! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/29/2010 6:35:00 AM
cute poem, enjoyed
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Date: 3/28/2010 12:08:00 PM
Truly beautiful lullaby, Noel!! Straight from the heart of a loving and caring person..only a caring soul would write this, Noel...THanks for sharing this and thanks for the encouraging comments left for me, today...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/28/2010 1:08:00 AM
Well written!
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