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Crying Shame

Beware of the crook and his wise guy’d spooks and their graven look-see. Whoopsie, of the bed, that you lie in now, like a crying shame, bereft of a semblance of size. Of the thief in the night — he does shuck all your pride. It’s a hell of a ride. Make it simple my friend: believe in the Word of the living God and let embers fall. Rise up on your knees, release all your sins Believe! It’s a win! 7/31/2021

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Date: 8/1/2021 11:41:00 AM
Meaningful, Kim Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Date: 7/31/2021 10:48:00 PM
Despite the humor, it still has an inspirational motive weaved in it. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2021 9:25:00 AM
Sometimes humor is what we need to see the light :)
Date: 7/31/2021 7:43:00 PM
Perfect ending! "release all your sins Believe! It’s a win! "
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 7/31/2021 10:49:00 AM
If we believe it is a big win and so little is asked of us. A wonderful poem Kim. love phyl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!

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