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Crying Rose

Her loved one is lost As sadness enters her heart A lonely rose cries http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-4.php

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Date: 2/26/2011 2:11:00 PM
Nice use of personification. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:19:00 PM
lovely x sarah xx
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Date: 7/25/2010 9:45:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku. Well written.
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Date: 7/25/2010 7:40:00 AM
Beautifully written my friend. And you know I can relate to the feelings you express so eloquently. Vacation is fun, but I have missed hearing from you. Hope you are well. I will probably be leaving the site, but I can still stop by and read your work :) Woodrow Lucas's blog made me realize this is not the same "family" it used to be. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:55:00 AM
One word comes to my mind ~ beautiful ~
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:25:00 AM
I can relate to this one....Sara
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:21:00 AM
Beautiful James ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/24/2010 11:29:00 PM
Very touchy!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/24/2010 10:02:00 PM
A beautiful way to portray sadness James, thank you for your comments as well Wilma
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:53:00 PM
Well penned Senryu
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:28:00 PM
beautiful senryu
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