Crying Rose

Her loved one is lost As sadness enters her heart A lonely rose cries http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-4.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 26, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Nice use of personification. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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July 25, 2010 at 5:19 PM
lovely x sarah xx
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July 25, 2010 at 9:45 AM
A beautiful Haiku. Well written.
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July 25, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Beautifully written my friend. And you know I can relate to the feelings you express so eloquently. Vacation is fun, but I have missed hearing from you. Hope you are well. I will probably be leaving the site, but I can still stop by and read your work :) Woodrow Lucas's blog made me realize this is not the same "family" it used to be. Love, Carolyn
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July 25, 2010 at 6:55 AM
One word comes to my mind ~ beautiful ~
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July 25, 2010 at 5:25 AM
I can relate to this one....Sara
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July 25, 2010 at 4:21 AM
Beautiful James ~ Sharon :)
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July 24, 2010 at 11:29 PM
Very touchy!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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July 24, 2010 at 10:02 PM
A beautiful way to portray sadness James, thank you for your comments as well Wilma
Mehta Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 5:53 PM
Well penned Senryu
Roberts Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 5:28 PM
beautiful senryu
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