Bassam Yassin Poet Free verse

Crying In Whisper

In my country,
Seeing smoky sky
Is nothing,
But Killing kids kills
Me everyday, every minute
Every second,
No matter with
Thundering bullets
Or lightening rockets;
It is being our daily habit
No more choices:
To die or but to die
Silently without even a whispered Cry,
Or a small bit of a registered grave;
It is happening now just in my country!

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Beata Agustin April 5, 2025 at 11:03 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 8:43 PM Bassam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT** Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:35 PM thanks for your comment..

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2013 at 9:46 AM Hi Bassam,... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA* Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:36 PM Hi Linda... I happy with your comment :)

Juli- Michelle October 3, 2013 at 2:14 PM Congratulations on your feature!!!! A wonderful read Love, Juli-Michelle Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:37 PM Juli.. thanks

Kechi Odibi October 3, 2013 at 12:06 PM Nice one here Bassam. It's a pity such things happen to children or to any one at all. Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:38 PM Thank you for your comment

Debbie Guzzi July 5, 2013 at 10:14 AM I do pray things are changing for the better. Light & Love Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:38 PM Debbie.. we still have hope... thanks for your words.

Betty Bolden February 19, 2013 at 6:29 AM very nice work Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:39 PM Betty.. thank you

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2013 at 4:03 PM A pleasure to read your work this evening. I wish you'd write more! Light & Love Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:41 PM Debbie.. I promise you to start writing soon after long time since I published this one...

Debbie Guzzi November 25, 2012 at 9:46 AM So frustrating and so hard to really understand from afar. In the US we can leave..so easily, we have roads, e have cars, we have freedom of movement and we don't understand..you can't even really leave..I hope writing helps a bit and you will do more of it. Light & Love Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:43 PM Debbie.. thanks for your words

Poet Destroyer A November 22, 2012 at 5:10 PM Bassam, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:44 PM appreciated your comments... thank you

Chidozie Uche O. October 18, 2012 at 5:17 PM A touching write up, all happening in Syrian, I know, human know, mankind knows, God knows........ Wonderful piece, poet Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:44 PM thank you

Harry Horsman September 8, 2012 at 4:05 PM wow Bassam, this is a powerful poem, and should be read by everyone of us. Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:45 PM Hi Harry... appreciated Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:45 PM Hi Harry... appreciated

The Situation September 6, 2012 at 7:57 AM Sorry, I did not notice the years the other piece was writen. But this tells the truth. I thought the peacefull message was government controled. This one opened my eyes. Bassam Yassin July 28, 2021 at 12:35 PM Thank you for your comment...

Jayachandran Chakrapany June 21, 2012 at 12:39 AM nothing here static for long .one day the throne of your DICTATOR will be overthrow .so sad the pictures you give .jk Bassam Yassin June 22, 2012 at 9:05 AM Thank you Jayachandra...That day is coming for sure....Bassam

Richard Palmer June 20, 2012 at 3:59 PM sad how man kind has become so cold,that even children have become targets of evil,sorry, my prayers are with you Bassam Yassin June 22, 2012 at 9:07 AM Thank you Richard...your comment makes me feel I am not crying alone....Bassam

Joann Grisetti June 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM Welcome to poerty soup. I enjoyed reading your sad poem. Look forward to reading more. Bassam Yassin June 19, 2012 at 1:12 PM Thank you Joann for reading....:)

Twanna Irisha June 19, 2012 at 12:22 AM This is so sad...love your poem. Bassam Yassin June 19, 2012 at 1:14 PM Thanks Twanna...your words appreciated :)

Debbie Duncan June 18, 2012 at 4:01 PM I liked reading from you,,,,, sad write,,,,, though well penned,,, I wish you a blessed day,,,,, Debbie Bassam Yassin June 18, 2012 at 4:25 PM Debbie...Thanks for your reading & kind comment......Bassam