Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bite Size Poem No. 72  -  Sponsor: Line Gauthier

                      September 22, 2023

Crying In the Moonlight

My breath was but a soft whisper,
not enough to ruffle the leaves of a willow
but he heard me crying in the moonlight.
With tender kisses he soothed my fears,
held me close within the circle of his arms,
until I no longer had reasons for my tears.

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Alexis Y. September 23, 2023 at 7:57 AM WoW! Lin, This is my kind of "bite-size" poem. I found it to be soooo romantic. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Lin Lane September 23, 2023 at 8:50 AM I know you're a romantic, Alexis... just like I am. Thanks for enjoying these lines.

Deb M September 23, 2023 at 6:53 AM Awww awwww and awwww …..absolutely lovely Lin ….so gentle! Debx Lin Lane September 23, 2023 at 7:50 AM Thank you for the sweets, Deb. Hugs.

The Situation September 22, 2023 at 7:52 PM The solution to many problems. Lin Lane September 22, 2023 at 8:15 PM It would be if I were in her place. I’m reminded of the song, ‘Try a Little Tenderness.’ Thank you for commenting.