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Crying Eyes

Could a sadder face there be? Oh Crying eyes, melancholy. Please, don't drip those salty drops. So many kisses I'd give to stop! I am yours you are mine we will get threw in little time. For what is life? A little race? We set the gaols we make the pace. So with me run. We will get threw. You help me, I'll help you Sure and keen eye's on the mark Let's give this course a little spark. Slow to see a river glide forest green, country side. Drink in scent of hewy blooms, pause to touch in cedar rooms Give this chase a pinch of spice A season spent to melt the ice, that grips us when, we do fear, of wasted steps, passing years.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/3/2024 11:28:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 9:50:00 PM
ROBERT, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:09:00 PM
- Tears is the eye noble language - Lovely poem, Robert - I wish you and your family a beautiful and peaceful Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Robert Rekab
Date: 12/16/2014 2:52:00 PM
much appreciated!
Date: 12/16/2014 11:47:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I can't tell how many times I've felt this same way when seeing the struggle of a loved one. I love your phrasing and flow. Beautifully written. Sincerely, Jonathan J.
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Robert Rekab
Date: 12/16/2014 11:58:00 AM
thank you very much. words never are enough, though good salve does not slow the healing.

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