Crying

A tear may fall to the depths of your heart.
It may tear you completely apart
as your body racked with sobs convoluting,
begs for soft comforting words, soothing
mind spattered brain 
waves, again and again.
Explosive neurons firing 
negative 
feedback
to the nerve system wiring,
inter-acting
to each muscle
contracting.
The avalanche follows
wetting the hollows 
of the eyes,
and overflows.  
Everyone knows
the embarrassment 
coming to stem the flow of tears,
increasing our awareness in later years
to not make the same mistake again
for fear of bringing back the pain. 

© 13 Dec 2010   Charles Henderson
        For Paula's "Tear" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/29/2010 11:23:00 AM
like it a lot
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Date: 12/17/2010 12:00:00 PM
This poem is unique and so deserving of its win, Charles. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:46:00 AM
Good one..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Those tears help to heal even though for men it can be embrassing to cry..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..You understood my work totally...Sara
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Date: 12/13/2010 6:18:00 PM
painful thoughts on tears....well written!
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:25:00 PM
Very nicely done, Charles! From an emotional perspective I don't know why the tears flow uncontrollably at times, but you have explained the physical causes as well as the aftereffects of embarrassment so well. Wishing you success in Paula's contest, my friend, and hope you are enjoying the holiday season. It's in the 30s now in FL and will be in the 20s overnight! That's just not right. Stay warm, Love, Carolyn (Did you see the Miami Dolphin get tripped by the Jets staff member?)
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:11:00 AM
This should do well in the contest. I like the start - stop flow..kind of like crying. BG
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:35:00 AM
Nice thoughts you have penned on tears - a good entry to the contest and good luck, Charles
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