Cry With Me

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Come feel my pain and cry with me, witness my loss to wind and sea. Maria washed away my dreams, her wails mocking the children's screams. Puerto Rico struggled to cope as a surge of water drowned hope. To lose all, even who you are outweighs the loss of house or car. Collapsed homes with no walls or roofs get pimped by the news, out for spoofs. And people feel they're all alone as Trump's heart quickly turns to stone. Food and water are things I trust, pray to God if you feel you must. My life was destroyed on that day as all I owned floated away. No lights in the streets and bars, night was given back to the stars. And as in a hypnotic trance, fear joined death in a ghoulish dance. (Rhyme) 10/19/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/15/2018 8:05:00 PM

Powerful. Superbly done, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/21/2017 10:27:00 PM

Maria was a devastation for sure, hopefully communities unite and rebuild, such a fine write.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2017 7:37:00 PM

Thank you Arthur, your comments and support are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2017 8:51:00 AM

Such a sad honest write my friend.. Well expressed.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2017 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Silent One, your comments and support are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 10/19/2017 10:27:00 PM

This is so intoxicatingly dour. In the way, I feel myself drink it in, and sigh a heartfelt sigh of regret that this has happened to them, and yet your words beautifully give their suffering a voice. Thank you for sharing this art with us.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2017 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so much Jesse, your comments and support are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/19/2017 9:37:00 PM

I cry with you and with them, these freak storms take their toll, enjoyed the rhymes although made me sad, well done Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2017 10:08:00 AM

Thank you John, as always your comments and support are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.