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Cry To God

Do you know how it feels, darling? Watching your hands on her, dangling I wipe my heart’s blood No tear’s shed but I walk in crawls And let a chunk of my heart falls Pale me cries to God (23 April 2012) For Tail Rhyme Time Contest Sponsored by: Black Eyed Susan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2012 2:52:00 PM
Awwwwwww.....very nice poem...great write...
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:06:00 AM
nice write,congrats
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Date: 5/17/2012 1:58:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2012 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest, loved always, bl
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Date: 5/15/2012 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest, loved always, bl
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:54:00 PM
a sad one, Dinda. Glad I am finally seeing your winning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dinda. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:10:00 PM
The heart that bleeds from love's pain....very moving. Well done on your winning placement in the contest !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Dinda!! on your win!! Well Done!! big hugs, love ya , deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:35:00 AM
Hey Dinda,Congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:25:00 AM
Dinda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dinda xx
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:49:00 AM
Very touching Tail Rhyme by you Dinda.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your kind comments at my pages.
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Date: 5/6/2012 2:01:00 PM
This draws out a deep despair from the author and I can palpate her pain...great topic for a tail rhyme...wipe my heart's blood is a super strong phrase. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/30/2012 9:22:00 PM
Your poem was perfect... Thank you for helping me understand that one line.. once again.. good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 4/25/2012 10:06:00 AM
deeply engraved work, dinda.. superb!.. best wishes and huggs!
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Date: 4/25/2012 9:37:00 AM
deeply engraved work, dinda.. superb!.. best wishes and huggs!
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Date: 4/24/2012 9:08:00 AM
a lovely sensible write Dinda, enjoyed..p.d.
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