Cry of the City

We will walk then, you and I

When daylight shuts her weary eye;

Down the streets where beggars sleep

And drug crazed addicts spend their keep.

On streets that wind through thick and thin

Past monuments of broken sin

The painted whores who smile a lot

A rejected child that time forgot.

 

The evening hymn that sorrows sing

The call to prayer that church bells ring;

The sounds and smells that rape a city

The calls for help that won't find pity.

Do we have time to heal the curse

That captures all the universe

Or would it really be worthwhile

To quell the question with a smile?

 

But we have walked these streets before

And hoped our ears could dim the roar

Of silence gripping cold nightmares

That come unbidden up the stairs.

We share the night with lesser fools

Who stake their plight without sound rules

For each new challenge finds old pain

That lives to give then comes again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nance Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Powerful! I saw this on the top 100 of all time and as it should be on that list, a worthy poem or high praise, the flow and subject is great and pleasingly displayed :)
Goudreau Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Oh my, such a moving piece of poetry. You've expressed deep emotions and heartfelt sentiments in this poem and yet society has little room to offer any kind of hope to these victims. How sad yet realistic. How expressive of you Lizzie and how deep are your thoughts in this write. You are the greatest poet!
Shiells Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 3:03 PM
Hi Elizabeth, This poem was written by a skilled writer. A poet through and through. This was simply elegant, truthful and breathtaking. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
Kithinji Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Going down River Road in Nairobi I can feel the convergence Of the sounds in your poem. You have to be on my favlist.
O'Leary Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Dear Lizzie, came back for another read... putting it on my favs to make future reference easier... Terry
Peranteau Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Some how, whether one has been down this rd. or not, the inflict can be felt by many, if not all. Great write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james
Essence Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 3:48 PM
What a great read thanks :)
Carrillo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 8:39 PM
Elizabeth; This is a sad , but very good poem. And so true. So much happens in a city. Today I saw on the news. That the neighbor hood where I used to live once In Chicago. One of the most wanted Capos of the DRUG Cartels has taken over and it is spread through out the city. I feel bad, because a lot of my friends live there. Thanks for sahring. Lucilla
Austin Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 10:32 AM
I said I'd read this one again. Did. I'm reminded of walking the streets of East Denver - where I grew up - and past the old Argonaut Hotel where some drunk had just thrown up. The doorman didn't give a damn. Love, dave
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January 29, 2013 at 6:27 PM
You have captured emotions I could never express nearly as well as you have here. This poem renders your comments on my work very rewarding. I appreciate your visit to my portfolio. It means a lot to this old wordsmith. ....... Love Ya much....... Jake
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January 12, 2013 at 1:29 PM
There is very strong wisdom in this unadorned & poigyant write addressing the bones of reality - so beautifully unpretentious Lizzie - if only an earnest smile would eradicate the harm of choice - 'For each new challenge finds old pain...' this so God damn true its sweet - with love & respect - J.A.B. %
Babcock Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 8:29 AM
It is part of life whether good or bad we find challenges in all cities. Wish it wasn't so but it is. An excellent write. love phyl
Squyres Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 7:38 PM
The cry of so many cities these days I fear. This is deep, so very deep and touches just the brief surface. Into my favorites it goes, that makes two of yours tonight...I'm so humbled by your words and talent !!
May Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 9:07 AM
An illustrious write Elizabeth....Happy new year
O'Leary Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Had to return... to re-read and to wish you Happy New Year, dear Lizzie... Terry
Duncan Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 4:59 PM
AWESOME, Elizabeth ;}
Song Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Outstanding....in every way!!!!
Ryerson Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 6:07 PM
Dark, forboding, hopeful and beautiful all rolled into one...amazing write, Elizabeth...you are one of the best for sure! - Tim
Mac Donald Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Dark and dismal images, Elizabeth. Reminds me of the scenery in "Oliver Twist". I'm sure Charles Dickens had walked along paths such as these. An outstanding write!:) I suppose although things may look different, they always remain fundamentally the same. Love, Mikki
Collins Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 9:11 AM
Dear Elizabeth, Dark the night, darker still for others. Stunning writing. lvoe, Kathy
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December 5, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Superb... in every respect! Terry
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December 3, 2012 at 9:32 AM
It's a challenge and must bear with that. It's called life and nothing else. Loved always your depth. Always, bl
Kovrlija Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:42 AM
I am speechless. This is is a great poem.
Austin Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 2:12 PM
What's to be said? This is absolutely outstanding, Liz. How could us old duffers put our views any more succinctly, more powerfully than this. I will want to read this one again many times. Love, daver
Neels Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Powerful write and imagery Lizzie, but then again you are a master at doing exactly that. Hope you are doing good my friend. ;) love Wilma
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