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Cry of a City

Wake! Kokura to a novel world of peace Under the canopy of dark divine clouds A million deaths and a zillion days of sufferings Ah! Flown to a distant land While the holy hands patting your shoulders Away Nagasaki crying, … a loud ghostly cry.. When the fat boy shed fireballs from above Flitting shadows unable to find a cwtch Death solidified, melted to florid streams On a boundless billowy sea of hellfire. Murky minds killing unknown souls Burnt alive was innocent, wicked and wise On their knees, a nation bend Away victory cried, … a loud cheerful cry… Ah! Know me first before you please to squander guns, grenades or guillotines At least the cognizant me die in peace, And a better predilection for your choicest blessings. Silent guns are a hackneyed dream Begging only for a better aim Away hope loath to stop, .. a loud wishful cry… (The plutonium bomb, Fat Boy, was intended to drop on Kokura City, Japan; but the city was saved by heavy clouds. Now, Kokura is considered as the luckiest city.) Date of Entry : 17-08-2020

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Date: 7/29/2023 5:54:00 PM
Amazing. Sounds like some virtuous people lived in that city at that time. Deep but well written. Cold and wet here but poetry gives warm glow. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 7/22/2022 6:58:00 AM
Eerie write Jenish. Linda
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Date: 8/18/2020 1:03:00 PM
You've painted such a powerful write. Why? Why did this had to happen in the first place? Power, greed:’(; and what did they gain?
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/18/2020 9:45:00 PM
Yes Eve.. You said it.. But what I tried to convey is about 'enemies'.. At least one has to fix them before attack..Now a days, terrorists are attacking whoever they find.. A boy carrying gun to school and attacking all.. There is no logic in it..
Date: 8/18/2020 3:09:00 AM
Such a big pain for the city.:-( But glad that they are considered as the luckiest one to survive amidst the cruel attack... "Death solidified, melted to florid streams On a boundless billowy sea of hellfire" each lines are emotional..dear Jenish sir, You've penned it excellent !!.Keep writing & glowing. Have a beautiful day.Take care.Warmest regards coming you way:-)
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/18/2020 6:14:00 AM
Yes, you are right sir.. Death makes random choice..!!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/18/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind support and comment Deepa.. Even in man-made disasters death is making random selection..

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