Get Your Premium Membership

Cry Me a River

Examining the measure of my calamity I grow resentful and I inflict pain Seeking to surrender all that possesses me I lash out at the innocent which discloses my shame I reach out The intensities of my suffering I shelve out Because my quantity is so immense I become incoherent Chaos is my universal place My ferociousness becomes timid Eternity my expected release date Society has snatched me by the choker My community flames an uproar Makes me want to cry…. Makes me want to holler What are we fighting for!? Each morning I rise to the same ole tune The classic sound Of the lowdown blues I have not delivered my hopes or my dreams My objectives along with my ambitions have went from flares to flickers To face another tomorrow makes me quiver I am distressed about authenticating my history Cry me a river!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/16/2024 4:36:00 PM
Expressive poetry, Sherry. I don't know, but I imagine writing about poetry like this helps to deal with the demons. Though it sounds like there's pain behind it, I like the lines "eternity my expected release date", and "chaos is my universal place".
Login to Reply
Beck Avatar
Sherry Beck
Date: 8/23/2024 11:53:00 AM
David, you’re spot on. Recognizing the traumatic pasts that once held me captive and expressing them through my writing is an integral part of my journey toward deliverance. Thank you!
Date: 3/29/2024 7:55:00 AM
Sherry, I believe that hurt unexpressed leads to anger and makes us quick to lash out. I am not young and have thought a lot about unrealized dreams. What I have discovered is that being loving and giving towards others seems to offset the negative....but I am trying it out and am not sure of anything really. Just reaching for solutions with some trial and error. I find reading some poetry here sometimes help if I find something that feels true to me and helps with my own demons.
Login to Reply
Beck Avatar
Sherry Beck
Date: 8/23/2024 12:02:00 PM
Duke, I wholeheartedly concur with your perspective on offsetting evil with kindness. It indeed creates a positive equilibrium that propels us forward. Life’s uncertainties become our crucible for self-discovery during this remarkable journey. Keep journying on!
Date: 7/6/2022 8:31:00 AM
Highly emotive and profoundly expressive write that speaks to and speaks of so many. So well done, Sherry.
Login to Reply
Beck Avatar
Sherry Beck
Date: 8/23/2024 11:55:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay, for your uplifting feedback! I truly appreciate it, and it encourages me. May you be blessed as well!
Date: 3/15/2022 3:48:00 PM
A lot of tragedy in this one, Sherry. You are being both mindful and depressed at the same time. Your introspection is impressive for the trauma you're experiencing. I hope the flicker can one day become a flame again. I agree, so much hate, we can all do better. It's important for all of us. Bill
Login to Reply
Date: 4/19/2019 3:12:00 PM
Nice one Sherry, good penning indeed. Blessings, Gordon
Login to Reply
Beck Avatar
Sherry Beck
Date: 8/12/2024 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things