Crust What I Kneaded

you just can't resist freshly baked bread 
at yeast I can't - crust me, I've tried!  

it whispers - 'I know you loaf me 
                          you know you knead me 
                             you butter hurry up
                               crumb and get me!'

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Date: 11/13/2022 9:33:00 AM
Very clever Julie! Congrats and high fives. Going to find the butter and jam now! All the best - "crust me!"
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Julie Draper
Date: 11/13/2022 9:53:00 AM
There's nothing like a fresh jam sandwich :) thanks Sam, I'm pleased you enjoyed it
Date: 11/10/2022 12:35:00 AM
very clever! excellent! well deserved top spot!!
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Julie Draper
Date: 11/10/2022 5:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Krish :)
Date: 11/9/2022 10:59:00 AM
Funny Punny. Congrats.
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Julie Draper
Date: 11/9/2022 11:29:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea :)
Date: 11/9/2022 5:22:00 AM
Doh! Very funny, congratulations
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Julie Draper
Date: 11/9/2022 11:30:00 AM
Hahahaha ... I see what you did there! Thanks Terry :)
Date: 11/9/2022 4:46:00 AM
Very interesting writing, indeed. Kitchen experience and minute observance! Congratulations!
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Julie Draper
Date: 11/9/2022 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj :)
Date: 11/8/2022 8:52:00 PM
Delightful humour, Julie. Your poem made me laugh ~ Congrats on top honours.
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Julie Draper
Date: 11/8/2022 9:07:00 PM
Oh wow! I'm absolutely delighted! Thank you very much Line :) I'm so pleased it made you laugh :)
Date: 10/28/2022 11:34:00 AM
This is so clever and cute. Enjoyed your play on words, Julie.
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Julie Draper
Date: 10/28/2022 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Milton, I'm delighted you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/28/2022 11:10:00 AM
Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Julie Draper
Date: 10/28/2022 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Rico, there's nothing quite like fresh baked bread yum yum :)
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