Julie Draper Poet Free verse

Crust What I Kneaded

you just can't resist freshly baked bread 
at yeast I can't - crust me, I've tried!  

it whispers - 'I know you loaf me 
                          you know you knead me 
                             you butter hurry up
                               crumb and get me!'

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Sam Kauffman November 13, 2022 at 9:33 AM Very clever Julie! Congrats and high fives. Going to find the butter and jam now! All the best - "crust me!" Julie Draper November 13, 2022 at 9:53 AM There's nothing like a fresh jam sandwich :) thanks Sam, I'm pleased you enjoyed it

Krish Radhakrishna November 10, 2022 at 12:35 AM very clever! excellent! well deserved top spot!! Julie Draper November 10, 2022 at 5:15 AM Thank you very much, Krish :)

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2022 at 10:59 AM Funny Punny. Congrats. Julie Draper November 9, 2022 at 11:29 AM Many thanks Andrea :)

Terry Miller November 9, 2022 at 5:22 AM Doh! Very funny, congratulations Julie Draper November 9, 2022 at 11:30 AM Hahahaha ... I see what you did there! Thanks Terry :)

Christuraj Alex November 9, 2022 at 4:46 AM Very interesting writing, indeed. Kitchen experience and minute observance! Congratulations! Julie Draper November 9, 2022 at 11:29 AM Thank you Christuraj :)

Line Gauthier November 8, 2022 at 8:52 PM Delightful humour, Julie. Your poem made me laugh ~ Congrats on top honours. Julie Draper November 8, 2022 at 9:07 PM Oh wow! I'm absolutely delighted! Thank you very much Line :) I'm so pleased it made you laugh :)

L Milton Hankins October 28, 2022 at 11:34 AM This is so clever and cute. Enjoyed your play on words, Julie. Julie Draper October 28, 2022 at 4:29 PM Thanks Milton, I'm delighted you enjoyed it :)

Rico Leffanta October 28, 2022 at 11:10 AM Enjoyed! Aloha! Julie Draper October 28, 2022 at 4:29 PM Thanks Rico, there's nothing quite like fresh baked bread yum yum :)