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Crust What I Kneaded

you just can't resist freshly baked bread at yeast I can't - crust me, I've tried! it whispers - 'I know you loaf me you know you knead me you butter hurry up crumb and get me!'

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/13/2022 9:33:00 AM

Very clever Julie! Congrats and high fives. Going to find the butter and jam now! All the best - "crust me!"

Julie Draper
Date: 11/13/2022 9:53:00 AM

There's nothing like a fresh jam sandwich :) thanks Sam, I'm pleased you enjoyed it

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/10/2022 12:35:00 AM

very clever! excellent! well deserved top spot!!

Julie Draper
Date: 11/10/2022 5:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Krish :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2022 10:59:00 AM

Funny Punny. Congrats.

Julie Draper
Date: 11/9/2022 11:29:00 AM

Many thanks Andrea :)

Terry Miller

Date: 11/9/2022 5:22:00 AM

Doh! Very funny, congratulations

Julie Draper
Date: 11/9/2022 11:30:00 AM

Hahahaha ... I see what you did there! Thanks Terry :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/9/2022 4:46:00 AM

Very interesting writing, indeed. Kitchen experience and minute observance! Congratulations!

Julie Draper
Date: 11/9/2022 11:29:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/8/2022 8:52:00 PM

Delightful humour, Julie. Your poem made me laugh ~ Congrats on top honours.

Julie Draper
Date: 11/8/2022 9:07:00 PM

Oh wow! I'm absolutely delighted! Thank you very much Line :) I'm so pleased it made you laugh :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/28/2022 11:34:00 AM

This is so clever and cute. Enjoyed your play on words, Julie.

Julie Draper
Date: 10/28/2022 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Milton, I'm delighted you enjoyed it :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/28/2022 11:10:00 AM

Enjoyed! Aloha!

Julie Draper
Date: 10/28/2022 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Rico, there's nothing quite like fresh baked bread yum yum :)