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Crushed Shells and Sand

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On the horizon's thin red line is the setting sun where we walk the shoreline of crushed shells and sand hand in hand words are spoken softly, hearts softly beating Ocean waves curling to shore seabirds diving into the water, crying out as ocean breezes envelop our skin all the more The evening's colors are red and purple The sunlight fades, and stars appear as though a curtain is pulled back revealing a full moon rising that seems so near Its golden rays splayed across the incoming tide leaving bursts of light on the tops of waves before they subside We turn, our eyes melting together in a silent understanding as waves now thin wrap around our feet welcoming romance, on a moonlit shore where its glow was landing Where the sun has set on this night we share as hearts welcome a starry night above and our lungs breathe in the salt air wrapped in the arms of love

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Date: 9/18/2023 5:41:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Frederic ... love the sound of this :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest (I didn't have time for this :) - Have a lovely new week :) - hugs
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Date: 9/18/2023 3:54:00 AM
Dear talented poet! I absolutely love the way you’ve painted imagery here, i read this like five times, and still was in awe, not just ocean have you shown us through your creative word weaving, but also a soothing ambience with colorful skies, i love that, your use of colors is so sumptuous! And the whole poem flows in such evocative and soulful rhythm, the ending is so heartfelt “ wrapped in the arms of love” so good! love a poem that makes me feel! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 9/13/2023 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful and comforting. Very nice :)
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