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Crushed

I feel your coolness next to my fingers. Your roundness excites my thirst buds. Oh my you need to be crushed. Your sweetness will exude your love. You were crushed for me. Now I can enjoy a chilled glass of wine. You gave your all just for me. My thanks to the grapes. Date Written:6/15/2020

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Date: 8/4/2023 9:58:00 AM
Paula, you seem like a great poem with a variety of poetic skills.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/4/2023 10:17:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your kind words. I enjoyed writing this one. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.......
Date: 6/15/2020 8:45:00 PM
wow...that last line sure qualified the (cofcof) what that got crushed....lol : ) stan sand
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Date: 6/16/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and writing. It was fun to write. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.......

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